|Reviews for King Midas, The Wallabee Beatles Story|
| Kiluca1228 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
great story so far pleasee update soon
| forever1x5 chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
oopsies! i seriously did put a block there sperating things, idk what happened, hmm, i posted it quickly before work, and didn't get a chance to look at it uploaded, i wonder what happened-_-, it has happened before tho, i'll take it down and re-upload it. And as for the part of him leaving her at the ice-cream parlor, thats coming up, and will be explained, i apologize for any confusion, and i'll fix it at my as soon as possible:)
| wherever-you-wander chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
This was slightly confusing.
Wally is pretty OCC, he would never leave Kuki somewhere, and he cares a lot about his teammates.
You have quite a few spelling/punctuation errors, and I would recommend getting a beta.
Also, I would recommend finding a way to distinguish your author's note from the story; at first I thought the AN was part of the story.
I'm sorry if this seems a little harsh, I think this could be a pretty good, if only it was brushed up a little.
| Numbeh 013 chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
COl! *smiles n thinks i'm not the only college student that still wathes cartoons*
so anything he wants? is there a clause?