Reviews for The Raven Rival
Shamille101 chapter 17 . 12/2/2014
Would favorite but long time since update... Put you on alert though!
fameludos chapter 17 . 1/18/2013
I love this its amazing please update!
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 17 . 8/19/2012
oh teddy your so stupid about ginny and victoire. im really curious as to what the end of the prophecy will be. what is it they have to pay for the exchange of time? i mean i dont really understand like will they have to pay with a life? you know life for a life? unless your going to go crazy and turn her into voldemot which wouldnt make sense since she is needed for the prophecy. unless somewho voldemort is in this time and that is what they have to pay for the exchage in time him being back and they need to kill him again. and what is wrong with ginny and victoire? victoire left him when he proposed you cant just come back into his life after that and try to get him to go back to you. and ginny your not his mom go away. i dont like victoire shes going to be a bitch and ruin everything. i still dont understand why you had to make ginny a bitch even if i dont like her character i dont understand why she is being a bitch and why did you have to bring victoire back makes no sense besides her being a bitch and ruining everything. i know you havent updated in like 2 years so please update! or if your not going to continue this you could just tell me what happens cause i do hate when good stories arent finished so if you dont you could just tell me. whats up with her shoulder its like harrys horcrux scar? does she have a horcrux from nagini biting her? did like nagini somehow exchange the horcrux from her to cara? and cara/teddy have to kill voldemort if he is back like i think he is? and im still pissed about the whole victoire business atleast i know nothing is going to happen since teddy loves cara and no matter how hard bitchtoire tries nothing will happen
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 15 . 8/19/2012
ginny is a bitch and needs to back up because teddy isnt her son. and victoire left teddy when he asked her to marry him back up bitch and go away. and teddy is being a bit stupid with how much time he is spending with victoire.
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 13 . 8/19/2012
go away victoire and ginny your being a bitch
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 11 . 8/19/2012
wow that was really risky but it worked
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 10 . 8/18/2012
yay they are together! wow wasnt expecting the sirius/lissa thing so sirius probably would have been her uncle if he lived which he will now so sirius is her uncle cool since i do love cara and sirius friendship
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 9 . 8/18/2012
i think they should take adam with them he would probably be dead if they didnt come back in the past so i dont think it would effect anything
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 6 . 8/18/2012
i think sirius is adorable and im glad he has cara to hang with i think they have an interesting friendship i like it. cara says she will have no one in the future but what about sirius hes like a combo of crazy uncle/brother? oh nevermind you alreayd mentioned that opps. still love the sirius/cara friendship i just love it for some reason
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 5 . 8/18/2012
i love how close she is to sirius its cute
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
aw i love hagrid hes just so adorable!
Smiles123 chapter 17 . 3/13/2012
awwwwwwwww UPLOAD
Lizzy0308 chapter 17 . 9/9/2011
I know you haven't updated this story in a year but it's really good. You should keep it going if you have any spare time at all. You're a good writer
puertoricandarkhunter chapter 17 . 6/16/2010
i know its ben awhile since you update, but i love your story. its the best teddy/oc story i have read and i really hope u can update soon.
cuddly-Cute-Canada chapter 17 . 6/14/2010
I Loved it! I cant't wait to read more.
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