Reviews for The First To Go
That Fantasy Junkie 96 chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
I really liked it. :) There's not a lot of fics with a lot of Angel. (It makes me said, Angel's awesome :D) So yeah well done! :D
Neferiti chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
So sad! T.T
TheLadyPendragon chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Oh, so sad. I like that you made use of the 'we're gonna get killed'. When Jack said that, then died, it was ironic, foreshadowing, and Angel's reply, too. Poor Mercers.
Cullen-Black chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Jack's death gets me every time, I really hate that they killed him in the movie but you did justice to what could have been going on in Angel's head when he saw his younger brother's dead body. Good job!
topaz addiction chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Wow. This amazing. It short, but very powerful. Angel's thoughts are very striking and really got to me. The last paragraph was the most emotional for me.

Your writing is perfect character and grammar/spelling wise.

So sad, but so great!
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Wow. Great job. I HATE that they killed Jack, even though I get the reasoning behind it. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
juniper294 chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
This is fairly shot, but good all the same. My favorite part is the part where you talk about we and how it only had 2 letters. good job!