|Reviews for Elements|
| Amy chapter 2 . 1/6
Some of the story seems to be cut off, with bits missing, but a lovely story nonetheless
| Handmaiden Dorme chapter 2 . 3/12/2006
This is soo good!
Hope Hoshi doesn't get hurt!
| Wrenn8811 chapter 2 . 6/6/2005
You must please continue, the plot line has definately bitten me
I really enjoy the flow of your stories, but the formatting is all pushed the left hand side of the screen.
| biro1 chapter 2 . 10/22/2004
i did not get the end, too.
its a very good story, very intense and i like the last tiwst about eddie...
Would be great if you would finish the story *hint hint*
| Koda chapter 2 . 12/2/2003
This is so good!
| Hockey Gurl chapter 2 . 9/3/2003
This is so cute, write more.
| asd chapter 2 . 7/2/2003
That was really good, but I didn't get the end;
With sweat still glistening on his pectorals, Malcolm Reed,
draped a towel around his neck, picked up his dataPADD and began
ter herself, and
Wyse won't hurt her. Because damn it, if he does, he'll be
answering to me-me and a torpedo with his name on it.
I'm either stupid or it didn't post right. You haven't updated in a while, and I hope that you are al least planning on ending the ptory and not keeping us all hanging. Please!
| Dolly chapter 2 . 5/4/2003
Really good and very interessting! Please continue! Like, soon!
| asd chapter 2 . 4/6/2003
Wicked. Very kewl.
| Liz chapter 2 . 3/1/2003
I enjoyed the story and would like to see the conclusion
| Aeon of Gravity chapter 2 . 6/2/2002
Please contineu soon! I enjoyed reading this fic! P Good job
| J.Dax chapter 2 . 4/1/2002
dying to find out what happens come up with another chapter soon.
| MJ chapter 2 . 2/5/2002
I'm impressed. I'm a big Enterprise fan and it takes a really good story to impress me. I love the dialog. "Bloody Hell" that sounds just like him. Please Keep Writing.
| Kala chapter 2 . 2/4/2002
That was grate you shold keep writing.
| JJ chapter 2 . 2/4/2002
Carry on, BUT don't get Reed in troble.