Reviews for Elements
Amy chapter 2 . 1/6/2014
Some of the story seems to be cut off, with bits missing, but a lovely story nonetheless
Handmaiden Dorme chapter 2 . 3/12/2006
This is soo good!

Hope Hoshi doesn't get hurt!

Update Soon!
Wrenn8811 chapter 2 . 6/6/2005
You must please continue, the plot line has definately bitten me

I really enjoy the flow of your stories, but the formatting is all pushed the left hand side of the screen.
biro1 chapter 2 . 10/22/2004
i did not get the end, too.

its a very good story, very intense and i like the last tiwst about eddie...

Would be great if you would finish the story *hint hint*

Koda chapter 2 . 12/2/2003
This is so good!
Hockey Gurl chapter 2 . 9/3/2003
This is so cute, write more.
asd chapter 2 . 7/2/2003
That was really good, but I didn't get the end;

With sweat still glistening on his pectorals, Malcolm Reed,

draped a towel around his neck, picked up his dataPADD and began


ter herself, and

Wyse won't hurt her. Because damn it, if he does, he'll be

answering to me-me and a torpedo with his name on it.

End log.

I'm either stupid or it didn't post right. You haven't updated in a while, and I hope that you are al least planning on ending the ptory and not keeping us all hanging. Please!

Dolly chapter 2 . 5/4/2003
Really good and very interessting! Please continue! Like, soon!
asd chapter 2 . 4/6/2003
Wicked. Very kewl.
Liz chapter 2 . 3/1/2003
I enjoyed the story and would like to see the conclusion
Aeon of Gravity chapter 2 . 6/2/2002
Please contineu soon! I enjoyed reading this fic! P Good job
J.Dax chapter 2 . 4/1/2002
dying to find out what happens come up with another chapter soon.
MJ chapter 2 . 2/5/2002
I'm impressed. I'm a big Enterprise fan and it takes a really good story to impress me. I love the dialog. "Bloody Hell" that sounds just like him. Please Keep Writing.
Kala chapter 2 . 2/4/2002
That was grate you shold keep writing.
JJ chapter 2 . 2/4/2002
Carry on, BUT don't get Reed in troble.
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