|Reviews for The Secret|
| poloes chapter 5 . 1/17
I LOVE you ending.
| theawesomeisadora chapter 5 . 12/27/2013
loved it soooosososososoooo much! aaaaaa
| CeliloChan4evar chapter 5 . 12/23/2013
The parents were reeeeeaaaaally mean. I think they should've died instead of Isla. (I know, I know, they're important to the story.)But why did Isla have to die? And why did the man kill her? That was the only thing that had me a little unsatisfied. It might've been easier to just say she got sick or something.
| aycee-san chapter 5 . 12/10/2013
*Me reading Chapter 4*
I read the word 'castrated'
I didn't really know the definition so I searched it up.
I think I collapsed onto my bed and kept on saying 'NO NO NO' to myself...
But I really love this story and the relationship with Alfred and Arthur and Arthur with Isla was very touching.
Luckily Arthur wasn't castrated...
| Izzabread chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
The way Isla wondered if the sky was blue, and Alfred the ground green *waggles eye brows* was that referring to their eyes, if not still quite clever though!
| BlueAngelFox chapter 5 . 9/10/2013
:3 i agree XD my reaction to arthur getting well u know:
Anyway i like this its very different from the other fanfictions ESPECIALLY obes involvibg a royal family
| PurpleLilacFlowerOfTheMist chapter 5 . 7/13/2013
Your story is truly beautiful! Nice history you have researched, by the way _. I thought there's more in chapter five *pouts* but anyway, I enjoy reading a lot! :D. Thank you for creating this story _.
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/6/2013
you did not capture the atmosphere of the monarchy
| moocow4me chapter 5 . 3/16/2013
Really good! :P
| yoink chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
is it awful I started to laugh at the "you're not interested in women so dress like the girl you are"? xD blame it one the sugar rush from ice cream...
| ace of spades chapter 5 . 12/15/2012
T_T you just broke my heart, such a wonderful story!
| rexlover180 chapter 5 . 8/10/2012
I totally loved reading this story! One of the best ones I've ever read, in my opinion. I like how you stayed with the stuff in the time period and I felt the emotions in Arthur and Alfred in everything you wrote and I just loved it! This was really good and I love your writing style! (And I am VERY happy you didn't castrate Arthur! That would have made life with Alfred a little awkward...
Anyway, I should stop babbling, but you really did an amazing job!
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/24/2012
DAAAAWWWW! XD! Cute story!
| DirectSomething chapter 5 . 7/6/2012
so happy he wasn't castrated...
| Alisper11 chapter 5 . 3/18/2012
I LOVED THAT! IT WAS AMAZING! Brilliant!