Reviews for Janita
Unknown chapter 24 . 12/31/2016
I really enjoyed this story, BROVO. This story was excellent, especially the characters! Naruto and Hinata's daughter was an amazing character and although I didn't like how cruel the enemy was, Air Jay was also an amazing character. At first I though this story would be not that good but I was terribly wrong. Good job on this story!
elipitt15 chapter 1 . 9/24/2016
One of the best Naruhina stories I ever I always come back to this even though the first time I read it was 2011 now it's 2016 still rereading this for fun I most read for any Naruhina fan it's better than the last
Steppdracule chapter 24 . 9/22/2016
Great story read it like 5 times
Guest chapter 4 . 2/12/2016
Hahahaha. Poor Naruto
Memel6 chapter 20 . 11/3/2015
You guys killed way to many people in the story and the fight with Air Jay Lasted wayyyyyyyyy to long there are a lot misspellings but other than those three flaws awesome story
Memel6 chapter 10 . 10/23/2015
Great story but the fight is wayyy to long it made me lose interest in the story air jay resurrected way to many times
lord-kurama chapter 24 . 8/15/2015
Awesome story enjoyed it alot...
Guest chapter 24 . 7/4/2015
Thumbs up
magicofantasy chapter 2 . 2/8/2015
Ok so whene I start to refine it I know what 2 expect more or less. ...the story so far is good (I'm at chapter 2 )but you could make Hinata resist more to her (fake father )or make her lost her memory after the explosion. ...it wold be better than see Sakura and Naruto hugging. ..its was just a hug not kiss ,this kind of misunderstanding is what hart the most ...
wp chapter 19 . 1/9/2015
The feels oh my f$%*# ! GOD!
Guest chapter 24 . 11/29/2014
I love it! It was so good, though there were some grammar issues here and there but other than that it was great! I really felt like I was seeing everything with my own eyes...I could follow the story very well!
Guest chapter 20 . 10/9/2014
man this story sucks air jay is too supernatural
mikaela.finch chapter 24 . 8/21/2014
even though it was a little hard to read I loved it. it takes a lot to get me to just read a story. yet yours took me on an adventure. though that war ship kind of remind of star wars. if you can catch my attention you can catch anyone's. you story was so good that I could see the things happening, as if I were there. for me it wasn't just reading, I was living in it. overall it was amazing and hope to see more like it. :D
Guest chapter 15 . 6/29/2014
Nice AU of naruto verse...even got slight bad grammar but for most part it still enjoyable to read...nice story...wonderful idea...and badass villain..._
ace chapter 8 . 1/6/2014
BORING stop it with your hand writing
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