Reviews for Prime VS the Pebbles
femme4jack chapter 17 . 7/5/2011
awwwwww! Sunset is a lovely designation for Momimus Prime. Love the conversation with the liaison at the beginning, and the Optimus/Elita moment was very tender and hot all at once.

There are certain aspects of DotM that I hope you will fix or happily ignore when you get to that point in your story ark. Just sayin'.
tyrantqueenofcons chapter 17 . 7/5/2011
Took me all day to read this but it was worth it! I love the arguments between Hubcap and the Chevy cute!
transformedstarwarsgal chapter 17 . 7/5/2011
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww cute a little love between the two. i like it update soon :)
Teddy-wabbitz chapter 17 . 7/5/2011
Sunsets are good, as was this chapter.
Cairistona chapter 16 . 6/30/2011
AWESOME! So glad to have you back! XD

Loved Ultra Magnus and Prime's interaction; that was great! *chuckles*

Oh, dude, that cons coming off the plane and figuratively drooling over the femme's weapons instead of the femmes was hilarious!

I love Chromia and Ironhide the way you do them, just love them...!

And this: ""YOU! Sneaking twins! I'll blast ya trouble makers into med bay!" Ironhide ran towards Sideswipe and Sunstreaker, missing Skids and Mudflap fleeing the other direction." was absolutely hilarious. :)

Ooo000OOh, Hupcap and Prime's mom...! O_O
Shadir chapter 16 . 6/28/2011
Aw1 Love in the air!
LunaeShark chapter 16 . 6/23/2011
AWESOME chapter! .

The mental image of Ironhide shooting bubbles is hilarious. XD

Have I mentioned that I love Optimus's mom? She's amazing!
Shizuka Taiyou chapter 16 . 6/20/2011
I have the feeling that Hubcap and Optimus' mom are going to get together aren't they? And do you have a name for her yet? Cause just calling her Optimus' mom would get tiresome.

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 15 . 6/20/2011
Lol. Oh Annabelle.

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 14 . 6/20/2011
Total total awsomeness.

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 13 . 6/20/2011
Lol. When females talk we talk don't we?

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 12 . 6/20/2011
O_o MOM!

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 11 . 6/20/2011
Optimus and Elita are really having fun aren't they.

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 10 . 6/20/2011
Sarah's pregnent isn't she?

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 9 . 6/20/2011
Total total awsomeness.

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