|Reviews for The Firstborn|
| blacksoul ACE chapter 1 . 3/18
If you properly watch naruto you would know chakra is the combination of spiritual and physical energy yin and yang .
| Laud de Saturno chapter 7 . 2/20
Es: "Bañate en la Sangre de tus Enemigos ... Zorro Asesino".
No podia no clarificar la frase :3
| rhizz17 chapter 11 . 2/4
will you still continue your story?
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/3/2015
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/11/2014
THAT DAMN RELEASE OFFENDS MY SENSES!
It's completely and utterly wrong.
Should be either:
¡Báñate en la sangres de tus enemigos, Zorro asesino! (informal)
¡Báñese en la sangre de sus enemigos, Zorro asesino! (formal)
and it can be "asesino zorro" as well, BUT NOT ZORRO DEL ASESINO. THAT SHIT MEANS KILLER'S FOX. WHAT WERE YOU TRANSLATING THIS FROM, FRENCH?
The other, should be:
¡Hazlos sangrar, Kyuubi! (Kyuubi Nueve colas, and this is casual).
¡Hágalos sangrar, Kyuubi! (formal, solemn).
| killer4853 chapter 3 . 8/17/2014
| Zayabel Draga chapter 5 . 8/3/2014
AAh shit I'm dyiing! Chapter 5 was da bomb... still is xD
| SirKhakingtonIV chapter 8 . 5/7/2014
THE POWER OF YOUTH!
| Dage chapter 11 . 12/16/2013
This story kicked so much ass
| Darksblade chapter 10 . 11/4/2013
this story was kick ass, i want more )
| Justin chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
awesome very cool and interesting need more plss
| Justin007 chapter 3 . 10/13/2013
plss write back I want to know how to write my own story
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/17/2013
come on update the redux one! i might spam you to get you to start!
| READ READ chapter 9 . 7/17/2013
hope you know if it was 5k long ago then yamamoto wouldnt be alive he is only around 2500 at the moment of his death so fix that and when is update! o and when do you think you can update because this is going on its 5 year of hiatus
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
...You don't know the Espada...at all...
Nel was removed cause she lost her memories and power. I don't even read bleach and I know more than you.