|Reviews for The Firstborn|
| AddictedDucky chapter 11 . 4/9
Great story, plot was nice. Shame it ended tho. With bunch of toxic reviews from guests I don't really blame you.
| AddictedDucky chapter 1 . 4/9
Huh, prologue that is interesting and long. Kudos for you :D
| Uzeal primordial of gravity chapter 11 . 12/25/2016
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2016
Did you ever learn geography at school ? If so please look at the elemental nations geographical map and the look at the island of Japan. Then can you tell me how entire continents can become an island! Because we learned Japan was formed from a volcanic eruption but you're too stupid to know that aren't you. Continents aren't formed from one volcanic eruption you stupid single celled monkey brained faggot.
| blacksoul ACE chapter 1 . 3/18/2016
If you properly watch naruto you would know chakra is the combination of spiritual and physical energy yin and yang .
| Laud de Saturno chapter 7 . 2/20/2016
Es: "Bañate en la Sangre de tus Enemigos ... Zorro Asesino".
No podia no clarificar la frase :3
| rhizz17 chapter 11 . 2/4/2016
will you still continue your story?
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/3/2015
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/11/2014
THAT DAMN RELEASE OFFENDS MY SENSES!
It's completely and utterly wrong.
Should be either:
¡Báñate en la sangres de tus enemigos, Zorro asesino! (informal)
¡Báñese en la sangre de sus enemigos, Zorro asesino! (formal)
and it can be "asesino zorro" as well, BUT NOT ZORRO DEL ASESINO. THAT SHIT MEANS KILLER'S FOX. WHAT WERE YOU TRANSLATING THIS FROM, FRENCH?
The other, should be:
¡Hazlos sangrar, Kyuubi! (Kyuubi Nueve colas, and this is casual).
¡Hágalos sangrar, Kyuubi! (formal, solemn).
| killer4853 chapter 3 . 8/17/2014
| Zayabel Draga chapter 5 . 8/3/2014
AAh shit I'm dyiing! Chapter 5 was da bomb... still is xD
| SirKhakingtonIV chapter 8 . 5/7/2014
THE POWER OF YOUTH!
| Dage chapter 11 . 12/16/2013
This story kicked so much ass
| Darksblade chapter 10 . 11/4/2013
this story was kick ass, i want more )
| Justin chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
awesome very cool and interesting need more plss