Reviews for Elizabeth's Pain
Paintedwings77 chapter 4 . 1/15/2013
I liked this too. I wonder what will happen in Chicago, and what info they have on her!
Paintedwings77 chapter 3 . 1/15/2013
this was sort of sweet. grandmother meeting grand daughter and daughter in law. something I can relate too (my dad never meet my daughter) so it was touching.
Paintedwings77 chapter 2 . 1/14/2013
that was very unexpected! this chapter was full of surprises. can't wait to read more
Paintedwings77 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
neat. at first I wasn't sure who was narrating. took me a minute to see it was Edward. but not bad got my curiosity going :)
oxo-ABANDONED-ACCOUNT-oxo chapter 12 . 10/5/2010
I can't say any more than that ths story is totally awesome! :D

It would be cool if you made a sequel... Please?

M
XxLesliexX chapter 12 . 7/23/2010
im sooo sorry for takeing long to review iv been having technical dificilty lol...ok so i was shocked when i read this in a good way though:D awww so elizabeth not staying but she got asked out(well corted lol)! did he know elizabeth? and ya rolsalie woke up:)oh i loved the ending!...soooo its over i loved this story soo much, this is one of the story iv read that iv reviwed alot of the chapters.

hope u keep writing ur an awsome authore
XxLesliexX chapter 11 . 7/15/2010
Its almost over:( but ill be sad next chapter when its realy over i dont think i have that many questions today lets see-Is the gohst realy dead?Is elizabeth going to stay with the cullens?Does brittney have eny other family?And last but not least is there going to be an epilog?(never mind about not having alot of questions the second i wrote that ALOT of quertions came into my head lol).(p.s-the last chapter was scary as you intended alot to do with the gohst moaning and vanpire hissing lol)
HollyShannenForever chapter 11 . 7/15/2010
Yay!
XxLesliexX chapter 10 . 7/10/2010
I saw eclipes the day realesed and i remember it perfectly and it is AWSOME.i did want roselies and jaspers storys to be loger but with there storys could make an entire movie lol so the had to stop some now to my endless questions-is rosalie going to have scares?,Are the volturies going to come?I dont get who emet saw its not someone he knows?,Oh and wheres renessma lol?
XxLesliexX chapter 9 . 7/4/2010
Awww thanks so much for the detication:).um does brittney not want to go because she scared? Where did brittney send them, does that place even have a name? Ok last question will there be other gohst there? This was a realy good chapter and it answerd the questions i asked last times so thanks, update soon :D
XxLesliexX chapter 8 . 6/30/2010
Why does she even want the heat? Is it because its hes dads and she feels more entilted to it than edward? Well i love this chapter it answers but as allways leaves me with more soon:D
Bellaangel383 chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
i love it!
XxLesliexX chapter 7 . 6/26/2010
Omg i have alot of questions lol? Why did bella not give edward the purple heart? Elizabeth does know he cheated on her and with who? i can belive he cheated on her with the maid, nice twist:)i cant wait to see wat happens with the cullens and edward and bella. hope u update soon:D
XxLesliexX chapter 6 . 6/24/2010
I know i just reviewed but the name i just reviewed on(XxLesliexX) is my real author or pen name watever u call it:D
XxLesliexX chapter 6 . 6/24/2010
Uhhhh i keep trying to review loged in but it keeps saying i already reveiwed(wich im pretty shure i havent lol) so i have to review anonamasly wich i hate:(.But i realy want to i was realy happy u updated so quickly:D.I didnt exept her to be a elizabeth said she looked familer what did she mean?Did she mean she looked like edward senio (or edward jr) Or did she mean she looked familer because she knew the the lady edward senior cheated with?...Hope u update soon:D
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