Reviews for Fine
CeeCee333 chapter 7 . 4/12/2013
I know this is an older story but, I went through your earlier writings. I must say, you capture these two characters realistically. Your balance of angst, sexy,and sweet is so perfect. You woman could put the writer of Fifty Shades of Grey to shame. Rock on!
sazzieazzie chapter 6 . 4/9/2013
Love ypur storywish i could find your prpfile on hear to read more
Angels-heart1 chapter 7 . 5/17/2012
This story was 'fine'! Loved it! Every bit!
Damira chapter 7 . 4/7/2012
That was hot. Well done, as ever.
Dannie Tomlinson chapter 7 . 4/6/2012
Wonderful! Loved it.
Kdmr87 chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
omg this was so freaking hot and sexy and just wow... i love how she was full of shit and expected her that night and of course she... well it all happened fabulously... ugh i love it a lot!
jenny crum chapter 7 . 1/28/2012
I loved it, I loved it, I loved it this was an awesome story
onetreefan chapter 7 . 6/23/2010
awww so good
Kimd33 chapter 7 . 6/22/2010
What a birthday present
Kimd33 chapter 6 . 6/22/2010
Ahh he thinks she perfect
Kimd33 chapter 5 . 6/22/2010
I like Garcia when she is being bold.
Kimd33 chapter 4 . 6/22/2010
Go Garcia
Kimd33 chapter 3 . 6/22/2010
Poor Garcia. She just needs a confidence boost.
Kimd33 chapter 2 . 6/22/2010
Can't blame him for being angry. At least he found her underwear.
Kimd33 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
What's wrong with her you don't leave.
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