Reviews for Angel's Embrace
TwiTwiAgain chapter 10 . 3/17
Wow, you really are having fun now that the Volturi are dead! I'm still worried about that Joe. I don't want him turned! No! No
Caz1105 chapter 44 . 3/14
Excellent again. You have such an imagination for stories and plot lines. Looking forward to the next one xxx
TwiTwiAgain chapter 8 . 3/14
Nice recap, so much going on. Now I'm worried Joe will be in the woods and turned! He would be James-like but multiplied.
Guest chapter 16 . 3/4
Ok...Bella& Edward need to live at the Forks house. The current living situation is unfair to everyone and since Felixis leaving the country totally unnecessary. Personally, I know this is mean but Tanya needs to be too late. She still hasn't apologized to Brandon and I don't think she deserves her HEA since she is just as big of bitch as ever. I guess I see it as a cautionary tale with her since she listens to no one.
Guest chapter 14 . 3/4
Ok...I know I am being redundant but, Carlisle told Bella now is not the time to tell Charlie because too much is up in the air. Carina told them that Felix is upholding the secrecy policy, so die or change, let's not forget that was Dimitri's reason for coming into their family. So, Bella promising Jake is wrong until the Felix situation is dealt with or resolved. Also, the conversation she had with Jake was reminiscent of Broken Angel. He is using guilt to sway her to his thinking and it gave me the creeps. Charlie is moping around, Sue is waiting for you, be fair to him? Are these people stupid? If he would have said "Charlie's recovery is really stressful on Sue, she thinks he may get better faster if he had you", ok, regardless of my feelings on the issue, I would get it but NOW, if she can't tell him, which Carlisle has technically already told her, Bella going to visit Charlie will make her feel guilty and heartbroken, kind of how she felt at the rock when Edward found her. I think Jake owes her an apology for unloading this shit on her. Oh, & it hasn't gone unnoticed that he has never "asked" her feelings, the Cullen families thoughts/feelings, or the ramifications NOW of telling him that she is alive and a vampire. I highly recommend you address this because Jake is falling back into old behaviors and I don't think Bella or Edward would take kindly to it.
LesleyLunaCullen chapter 25 . 3/5
It has always bugged me that the Cullens are untouchable, I was almost hoping that Emmett would be captured, it would have made things more interesting.
LesleyLunaCullen chapter 10 . 3/3
For some reason I can totally picture Jasper singing Johnny Cash. Something like Sunday Morning Coming Down or his version of Hurt, which most people associate with Nine inch nails but JC version is so haunting. Another good one is Angel Flying too Close to the Ground by Willie Nelson. I can so see Edward singing that to Bella. He and Garth Brooks are probably two of the most prolific song writers in any genre. My favorite GB is probably She's gonna make it or Standing outside the Fire. There is a song he wrote about love/ghosts that I am totally drawing a blank on but the Foo Fighters, Long Road to Ruin always makes me think of Twilight Saga. Ok, I have rambled enough. Ohh...Merle Haggard, another good Jasper, Waylon Jennings too.
LesleyLunaCullen chapter 9 . 3/3
I am still totally opposed to Charlie knowing and since every decision Bella makes is supposed to be self less, I can't believe she's not thinking along the lines of her putting him in more danger vs. Him being angry with her! My last hope is Carlisle because he has seen way too much and with possible southern wars and no leadership, I would think he would be very cautious of any additional exposure. Also, Edward saying that Charlie absorbed his story was ridiculous. He's in a coma! Every one is acting like this time with him has changed anything.
LesleyLunaCullen chapter 8 . 3/3
I don't think anything has to be said to Charlie and regardless of Bella being happier with him in her life, I don't think it's right that he's told! He got knocked in the head! There is very little chance he remembers seeing them phase and if he did he wouldn't believe his memory. It's more dangerous for Bella to be in his life, period! They will always have enemies, he will forever be a target till the day he dies. It's really selfish on Jakes part because he doesn't like hiding in plain sight and selfish again to put these thoughts in bellas head.
LesleyLunaCullen chapter 5 . 3/3 i keep wondering why the hunting trip separation was so difficult for E&B? I still want them to have a kid and I keep thinking that the Lost storyline will be a foreshadowing to some kind of magic on Isle Esme, especially in the hidden cave. Anyway, my second thing is that Portland seems too close to Forks for Bella to use her maiden name. I remember Charlie going there at one point. Seems risky to me since she is dead? Swan is not a common name, maybe she could use Bella Anthony, or make up Grandma Swans maiden name since Higginbotham is just awful!
TwiTwiAgain chapter 3 . 3/3
I love that we have to juggle Joe and the Volturi. When something happens, who will it be? Great way to keep us guessing.
lesuse chapter 25 . 12/29/2013
My first review CHELSEA'S DEAD! DING, DONG, THE WICKED WITCH IS DEAD! This story is incredible - so sorry Jane got away, but you have to leave some worthy opponents for another fightin' day! Bring it Felix we've got Demitri and all the Cullen's and BELLA THE SHIELD! How dare they come after the Cullen's and company! Lots of adrenaline flowing here felt like I was in the fight!
soonergirl143 chapter 44 . 12/10/2013
I have read all of the gravity series, and I'm following the new one fire and ice. They are all good. I don't always review each chapter preferring to wait till the end of the story. Sometimes it's all I can do to put the story down. Lol this was an awesome story and I look forward to the third book. :-)

Soonergirl143 :-)
divyvicki chapter 44 . 10/9/2013
I love the plot of this series. I can't wait to read an AH story from u. I'm not one for reading lemons, but I feel with ur stories I can skip through those paragraphs and not really miss any major events. I thank u for writing ur stories that way. Please thank ur Beta(s) and any pre-readers on ur team for their efforts in improving this story.
divyvicki chapter 43 . 10/9/2013
I like vamp stories because I like the whole immortality thing and them never having to separate, but I miss them eating. To bad someone doesn't write a story where they can eat either human food or blood.
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