Reviews for Dirty Little Secret |
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![]() ![]() ![]() whoops there’s a typo Astoria should be nineteen not ninety. I guess nineteenth and ninetieth are quite similar. Kudos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually had tears threatening to spill this chapter. I feel really sorry for both Snape and Astoria. He never received love from her when he was alive, but she didn’t realize he loved her. Gods I can’t deal with this, I’m completely hooked |
![]() ![]() ![]() ignore that review I wrote, wrong story hahahha. Although yours is included in one of the read and loved categories |
![]() ![]() ![]() As always, brilliant chapter! I honestly think this is going to be my absolute favourite story on here. I don't read and love very many at all, but as far as I'm concerned you're writing an astounding golden story, well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well written but very unrealistic. It is extremely unlikely that prejudiced pure bloods would celebrate an event that is both muggle and american (a baby shower). |
![]() ![]() Solo cute |
![]() ![]() If I was Azzy, I'd kill Malfoy after tuning him into a white bouncing ferret! |
![]() ![]() Bloody Hell! Snape! I should've guessed though. She does have greasy hair and is very good at potions... |
![]() ![]() MY HEART OMG IM CRYING SO HARD RIGHT NOW |
![]() ![]() IS SNAPE HER DAD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was my first hp fanfic and it is still my favourite. You did a great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I came here expecting another sappy romance starring Draco and Astoria (maybe even LOOKING for it), but this is such a refreshing change. Your treatment of the characters is so lifelike. I never realised it, but this is exactly why the kind of rhetoric that must have informed Draco Malfoy’s opinions and choices. You’re a wonderful writer with a knack for description, especially when it comes to internal states. You capture the essence of a moment, even one that might’ve taken place hundreds of times before, in such novel terms that it makes your work an absolute pleasure to read. Thank you for this story, and never stop writing! |
![]() ![]() I love this story so much! I ship Dramione, but you have got me reconsidering... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the best AstoriaDraco fanfiction that i've ever read! With a twist of Snape woah! Totally love the plot and storyline. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They are all prostitutes here... horrible |