Reviews for Dirty Little Secret
shayisbored chapter 32 . 10/24/2014
I absolutely love how you portray Astoria. I think that the character you made her is absolutely perfect for Draco.

Your style of writing is so original, and you have an amazing plot line. I know it's kinda late to be posting a review, but thank you :)

I don't know if people do this when they are reviewing, but I would be grateful if you could give me your opinion on my work :)
Guest chapter 33 . 10/13/2014
Hello, well this was my first voyage onto the Draco/Astoria ship. I'm a secret shipper of the Draco/Hermione, but this was a great story in exploring that ship. You certainly tied your loose ends but not into a pretty knot, towards the end it just seemed very rushed. This still is a great story. Very believable indeed as to how they could have meet and what happened between them and how their relationship developed.
Thanks for sharing! Keep on writhing!
Slaidback chapter 33 . 9/7/2014
Normally I don't read Draco centric stories, but this was epic.
shayisbored chapter 33 . 6/22/2014
Thank you for this amazing fanfic! One of my OTP's is Drastoria, and you have done the most amazing job writing this story. The plot is brilliant, and your writing style is great :)
ParadiseForest chapter 33 . 5/7/2014
I read that from start to finish. From 7pm till now, which is 1:37am British times right now. Holy Jesus. And you made me cry :( poor Astoria with the Snape thing. Endings make me cry. Happy or sad, I cry. This is like the 5th time I've read this. And I fucking love it. Write more and make me cry again please your an amazing flicking writer and I hope you know that
Guest chapter 33 . 2/14/2014
Love this story! I was wondering, could you do a fanfiction for George and Angelina? I've been struggling to find any that I like, because all of the stories of them I've found so far are terribly written and have a terrible plot. But I know you're a great writer and could write a well written George/Angelina fanfiction. Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 19 . 2/2/2014
I really like this story. I'm usually very strict with sticking to canon, because, if it's good enough for JK Rowling, it's good enough for me. But I love the twist you have with Astoria's parentage, and how Draco doesn't care that she's not Pureblood, and that everyone knows she's not Pureblood. I honestly would've liked JK Rowling to make Astoria a half-blood. Not Muggle-born, because I don't think Draco will ever be comfortable with Muggle-borns, but a half-blood would've been good. I love Astoria's character in this, and how she says whatever's on her mind and doesn't care what people think about her. I also liked the part when Draco killed the peacock and convinced the house elves to cook it for their dinner, and he only told them it was their peacock when Lucius had had a few bites. I laughed at that part! So basically, if that's not obvious enough, I really like this story. :)
pkp033 chapter 2 . 12/5/2013
Just read the first two chapters...

So is Astoria Snape's daughter?
Guest chapter 3 . 9/20/2013
Old 97s fan, are we? :-)
citrusfan chapter 33 . 9/10/2013
I really loved this story! One of my favourites ! Really good writing and chapter length and everything. Just perfect!
Lee Gold chapter 33 . 5/8/2013
So awesome.
So worth the time it took to read it!
boundtobite chapter 33 . 4/26/2013
Fantastic story. Great character building. Interesting plot. :) All in all, Thank You :D
SoTimeless chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Absolutely brilliant story, love it!
peppersweet chapter 33 . 1/19/2013
I just read this entire story in one go and, wowee - it's pretty damn hot but it has PLOT (sorry for the lame rhyme). That's pretty rare in fanfiction so seriously, seriously good job here. I don't usually go in for Dracos who are written like this but yours is just PERFECT. Loved this story!
Mrs Malfoy 2011 chapter 33 . 1/12/2013
Love this fic so much, should've commented when I first read it a couple of weeks ago, anyway I really love it.
The epilogues were fantastic and I really would like to read more awesome Draco/Astoria fics from u, u r a wonderful writer.

Thanks a lot for sharing this Magic with us_
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