Could someone explain what just happened? From a business standpoint? Im a bit confused

Just started reading this fan fic and I have to admit that your depiction of Astoria Greengrass is very interesting. I actually like the way she dealt with Draco by using her wit instead of her wand. Also I give you credit for not falling into the "Ice Queen of Slytherin" cliché with her sister Daphne.

fantastic!

love it

I read this a long time ago but never reviewed it... but I came across this again and I thought you deserved to know. This was fantastic and amazingly plausible. Good job!

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I cried this chapter.

There's just something about kittens (Even the stuffed kind.) being subjected to things like burning and such that gets me teary-eyed. Poor Astoria. D:

I want to kick Pansy's stupid face. XD

I remember reading some chapters before, and I remember how much I love this fic. Why I did 't finish I don't know, but I will read it all~

Hi, I just decided to reread your story (which is one of my favorites), and started wondering how the he'll Daphne got into Slythrin in the first place. I can't find one Slythrin quality about her. Did the Sorting Hat take pity on her realizing that if she was sorted into another house (Hufflepuff) her mother would get even more on her case? Anyway that was just me ranting. I do love Daphne in the story especially towards the end. This is one of my favorite fanfictions and I am loving your Rose/Scorpius fanfic also. Cheers :)

I really liked this story. I've read barely any stories about Astoria and Draco getting together, and when I find one, especially one so well-written, it's always interesting to see how their relationship progresses. I really liked the way you wrote the characters, and also, Snape being Astoria's father? It wasn't until you basically spelt it out that I realised, despite the clues! :)

I don't know if I'll read the sequel... Doesn't seem like my kind of thing, to tell you the truth. I did enjoy this story though. It was dramatic, with the kind of complex plot that begets novels. Your writing talent is considerable, and I hope you continue to develop it, even if I might not read it. Best wishes.

Ron is right, he got off to easy and everyone is acting like he didn't commit multiple, horrible crimes which caused innocent people pain.

Hi there!

I just wanted to say that I loved Loved LOVED your story. Your character development was right on and you Astoria was awesome. I thought that your interpretation of what it meant to be syltheren was awesome. All around enjoyed it all the way through

Tragic...I'm in tears...I thought she might be with "child" the whole chapter...

HOT!

:)

very interesting