|Reviews for Hail Mary Pass|
| PastOneonta chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
This is so moving my heart hurts. So effective in conveying Jake's pain and a final effort to save Bella. The 'rock on her left' will drag her to her death. Thanks for writing, we appreciate it.
| Darkgreenrain chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Wow! That was small but beautifully made...
| Kim-imprinted-on-a-wolf chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
| BrookeBelikov chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
| Tim C. Girl chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Wow. You definitely write the best angst I've read in a while.
It's so painfully beautiful though...
| thewasofshall chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Oooh... I LOVE this imagery: just like she knows that the one word he couldn't bring himself to say aloud will be enough to make the paper in her right hand entirely outweigh the rock on her left. I kind of like not knowing what Bella is going to decide, even though I kind of already know the answer.
| no emotion no pain chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
short but great!
| meagarunt22 chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
You are amazing. I hope you continue you're writing. You write in a way I only wish I could and you make me fall into your stories and feel things for the characters that other authors don't come close to doing. You are officially my favorite and you better keep spitting out the stories to supplement what I've been missing out on! :)
| san potter chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
so sad! i always thought smeyer's version of vampirism was perfect and that i'd want to be turned as well but this makes me rethink it (like it did to bella).
| quamquam20 chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
This remains one of my absolute favorite fics of all time... OF ALL TIME! lol
Lovely job 3
| katerad4 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
I love this!
Gosh, I wish you'd written the part where she runs after him and kisses him and apologizes for being such an idiot!
I wish that part were cannon. :(
Last line is perfection!
| Jacobsgrl chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
"the one word he couldn’t bring himself to say aloud will be enough to make the paper in her right hand entirely outweigh the rock on her left." Beautiful and heartbreaking.
I loved this so much. It always bothered me that Bella never seriously thought about all the things she would be giving up - like the 21st B-day, her parents or Jake. She didn't even do any fun or crazy things before her transformation. She was so busy trying to get turned and end her life, that she never actually lived. "because if she doesn’t see it, it isn’t real" is so true. She just chose to ignore what she'd be giving up rather than face it.
| Aspirations of Whimsy chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
THAT... was so, so good.
| alexbluestar chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
| twilightfanficreader chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
this was amazing.