Reviews for The Fourteenth Gives the Order Hell
PlaidOtaku chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
And the song is so damn perfect !
PlaidOtaku chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS AMAZING IT MAKES ME GIDDY
Tammy chapter 1 . 3/30/2016
Duuuuudddddddeeeeeeee!
TS4Life chapter 1 . 9/24/2015
This is amazingly angsty, bloody hell! I LOVE IT! If I knew you we would get married I swear on my... meh I'll find something eventually.

Marriage proposals aside, you are a very talented, creative writer.

P.S. It took me an hour to finally finish this review because I was too busy reading your ENTIRE PROFILE which is hilarious...my teachers wont know what hit them.

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Silver chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
I LIKE THE SONG... Kinda heart breaking but awesome
Felina the nekomimi chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
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Tyki075 chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
That song actually fits that situation quite well, and that's sort of depressing... Amazing job!
The15thNoah chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
I FREAKIN' LOVE IT
KhaalidaNyx chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
14th is awesome
Ryonkiii chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Noah!Allen so wonderful
Kumika95 chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Um, interesting story, though why'd you base it on a song? I think you may not want to choose such a well known song, because that takes the effects of the story away.
Emo Bunny37 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Wow that was cool i love it
FatesFavorite chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
aw poor allen... or fourteenth -thoughtful face- hmmm interesting. Awesome story :D
Calcium oxide chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
That was really sad...

I like the lyrics, though personally I don't think the song fits the story. It's sounds too happy I guess.

Anyway, update?
csibpip chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
It's DAMN GOOD! I REALLY loved it!
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