|Reviews for Finaly|
| Cassandra Eve chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
TTTT wah! i love it! so tragic but somewhat heart warming TTTT uhwa! :((
please continue writing!
| ch4ppy-py0n chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
this really did make me cry! D: i don't like thinking that aldred might infact be dead and that kei will soon follow *uwah D':*
it's great thhough. you set the mood so well and pced it just right, not rushing his death or dragging it by too slowly 3 faveing and is hoping you'll right more. seriously we need more Rustblaster fics. thers onl 17?
| BeyondMyReach chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
| ireadtoomanybooks chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
At lest it wasn’t all that bad as he first thought…" lest least "It’s to bad….." to too "The sad thing was that all his other friends where there…..
He just didn’t know that…" where were "Whiting….
Whiting for when the end would come…" whiting waiting "“Why does things have to be this way?”" why does things why do things "It just keep going…
bring sadness or joy….
It doesn’t matter….." it just keep it just keeps; bring bringing "But at lest he would be able to find peace….." lest least. Phew! Finished :D This was really cute, even if they died, coz they got to be together in the afterlife :D Love!