|Reviews for Code Geass: Cornelia of the Uprising|
| Doom Marine 54 chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
The ting I would have done was switch Kallen and Suzaku's roles.
| anon chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
Care to explain why this came to be?
| The True Not Important chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
I sent you a message and I hope you read it and take what a I BEGGED of you under advisement. THANK YOU!
| 00Zy99 chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
OK, this story has a great concept, and some parts of the execution, such as the OCs, were well done. However, stories are generally done in past tense not present tense. If you slow down, correct the grammer, and expand on few points, like who the various OCs are, how Cornelia came to be at Ashford, what Lady Marianne is doing, etc. Please bear in mind that around the time of the invasion (when Lady Marianne was assasinated in canon) Cornelia was starting out in the military, a somewhat low ranked officer in charge of the guards surrounding Lady Marianne's villa (Lady Marianne was her idol after all). Also, it's worth noting that the various imperial siblings are ranked in terms of their military and chess skill: Schneizel first, Lelouch second, Cornelia third, Clovis fourth. This should factor into anything that happens in the story-if Lelouch becomes the new Viceroy, which he should, then Cornelia will have a much harder time of things than Lulu did.
| mfmxxx chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Cool, can we see some Lelouch pairings still though? :)
| Aceina chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
verry good fic my love but 2 things
1. u forgot to include yuri in the discirp
2. u didnt make sure i was on to read before u posted *pout* and y u not on msn
any ways verry good so far i like it and cant wait for more and update soon and all that good stuff and keep up the good work