Reviews for The First Sunrise
Guest chapter 7 . 12/24/2013
hhhhhhiiiiiiiii
Susan chapter 14 . 8/20/2012
Great book but why doesn't that call what is there like no phones? If they can't call Cuz of security then they could use a pay phone or call Billy. But good story so far
lzytigger chapter 25 . 3/19/2011
very well written , enjoyed it very much
Vikw5 chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
your story is amazing and very suite:)
Marmar chapter 25 . 1/19/2011
This was amazing ! Can't wait to read more !
Greek Wise Girl chapter 21 . 9/25/2010
cool, I love the parts where Jacob proposes to Ness and the ring's from Jacob's mom... that's awesome!
crazykittys chapter 4 . 9/19/2010
great!
AshleighHutcherson chapter 7 . 8/30/2010
hi! i just wanted to say that so far, i've really liked everything i have read :) you really put across nessie and jacob together well! Keep writing new material...ill be reading the rest of The First Sunrise and the sequals!
wolfie96 chapter 4 . 8/5/2010
grfeat chapter 410/10
wolfie96 chapter 2 . 8/5/2010
great story! love it 10/10
BroadwayGlory chapter 3 . 6/30/2010
i am loving this story so far. I have started using fanfiction to satisfy my reading and writing needs1 youy'r story is one of my favorites, and I'm going to subscribe! Thanks! Read my oown point of view on where nessif and jake would go in The Nessie Chronicles! Thanks so much!
confusednikki24-7 chapter 25 . 6/24/2010
this was such a good story! i love it! now onto read your other one!
kaitskait56 chapter 25 . 5/12/2010
EEEEEEEP! I loved this book brooke! :) I read it in two days :))))

ur big fan

-kait
kaitskait56 chapter 20 . 5/11/2010
YAYYYY! I'm happy when nessie's happy :)
kaitskait56 chapter 14 . 5/11/2010
Sad chapter but I still love your writing :) Keep going!
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