Reviews for The Test
Lan Yue Hime chapter 2 . 1/20
I know this is an old fic of yours, but I have a really big problem with how you depict Nami. She isn't the type to care about manners from luffy, whether she is male or female. The reason is that she will understand that luffy, despite appearances, is a man. He is just a man in a woman's body. Nami is a very understanding person. The only times she gets angry and yells, is when the crew members do something outrageous that threatens their safety, or something perverted. Nami won't discriminate against people who believe they were born in the wrong body, hence she won't care too much about the lack of manners from luffy.
Eevastiina chapter 15 . 12/5/2016
I'm reading this again!
And I have to say that it's still as good as the last time. I still can't hold back laugh when I'm reading this and the next few chapter.
Still reading, and still going to read! XD
Eevastiina chapter 33 . 11/11/2016
Eevastiina chapter 27 . 11/10/2016
What's going to happen to Luffys and Zoros second child!?
CAN'T WAIT to read to find out!
P. S. I'm still a bit concern can I use you story in my essay. This is just too good, can't help but read it!
Eevastiina chapter 23 . 11/9/2016
To be honest, I'm actually scared for Luffys sake. I keep thiking: "What if happens this", " What if happens that", and I can't WAIT to read more!
The way you write is just something... SOMETHING!
I can't help but read it more!
I was wondering if I could use our story in my literature essay. I haven't found book yet and I was reading this so...
Can I have your permission?
Guest chapter 33 . 11/1/2016
This is so good! A great story of romance tragedy and sorrow it is well knitted together to create a master piece and although it stopped at chapter 33 (for me at least) it was great and i humbly appluad you!

MadelVer chapter 33 . 10/4/2016
dude, you need to continue the story its awesome
Norn chapter 33 . 9/12/2016
I really like all of the chapters. I think that I liked it more at the start when luffa didn't know what to do like when he was on his monthly. Or when he was pregers. To be honest I did not really like when puffy got defiled. But I did like it after that, luffy being a boy. I think that would have been better with like 6-6 year time skip. Liked it heaps
ekykah28 chapter 13 . 8/6/2016
This is wonderful
Guest chapter 6 . 5/12/2016
Ok, so you can write a lemon, but you can't type in a complete curse word?
RedPandaKiller99 chapter 26 . 10/11/2015
chapter 26- Yeah! Luffy is free and has his son... but will zoro turn gay for luffy?! and what about smoker and luffys other son? they must discover him! AND NOW LUCCIS SON MIGHT SURVIVE! I bet your enjoying messing with every ones head!
RedPandaKiller99 chapter 24 . 10/11/2015
chapter 24- WOOHOO sucked in Lucci your seed is UNWORTHY OF LUFFY! poor Luffy... BUT NOW THEY HAVE THEIR SON BACK SAFELY! woohoo... but what about the other ones? HURRY UP GUYS LUFFY IS BEING RAPED WHILE YOU ARE TRYING TO RESCUE HIM/HER! and Zoro FINNALY cried... awesome...
RedPandaKiller99 chapter 23 . 10/11/2015
chapter 23- Your an amazing writer and all... BUT YOU MADE ME CRY... POOR LUFFY! I hope luffy never conceives his child! *starts crying dramatically... LUFFY! I'm still crying... lets hope next chapter is a bit more hopeful...
RedPandaKiller99 chapter 22 . 10/11/2015
up to chapter 22- ok... i know that there is so many chapters after this one buttt... (hehehe i said but) IM SO FREAKING OUT! this fanfic has me hooked AND I DONT WANT LUCCI TO 'BREED' WITH LUFFY... I'm gonna cry! ok I'm gonna read the next chapter now...
Spad3z chapter 33 . 8/3/2015
The last update was years ago but I really hope you finish this fic!
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