Reviews for The Test
RedPandaKiller99 chapter 26 . 10/11/2015
chapter 26- Yeah! Luffy is free and has his son... but will zoro turn gay for luffy?! and what about smoker and luffys other son? they must discover him! AND NOW LUCCIS SON MIGHT SURVIVE! I bet your enjoying messing with every ones head!
RedPandaKiller99 chapter 24 . 10/11/2015
chapter 24- WOOHOO sucked in Lucci your seed is UNWORTHY OF LUFFY! poor Luffy... BUT NOW THEY HAVE THEIR SON BACK SAFELY! woohoo... but what about the other ones? HURRY UP GUYS LUFFY IS BEING RAPED WHILE YOU ARE TRYING TO RESCUE HIM/HER! and Zoro FINNALY cried... awesome...
RedPandaKiller99 chapter 23 . 10/11/2015
chapter 23- Your an amazing writer and all... BUT YOU MADE ME CRY... POOR LUFFY! I hope luffy never conceives his child! *starts crying dramatically... LUFFY! I'm still crying... lets hope next chapter is a bit more hopeful...
RedPandaKiller99 chapter 22 . 10/11/2015
up to chapter 22- ok... i know that there is so many chapters after this one buttt... (hehehe i said but) IM SO FREAKING OUT! this fanfic has me hooked AND I DONT WANT LUCCI TO 'BREED' WITH LUFFY... I'm gonna cry! ok I'm gonna read the next chapter now...
Spad3z chapter 33 . 8/3/2015
The last update was years ago but I really hope you finish this fic!
FAN chapter 33 . 6/23/2015
Please continue this!
Nana von Bloedsinn chapter 33 . 5/29/2015
fascinating story.
plz don't give it up
i'm curious about many things there.
hope to see more soon
alniemargallo chapter 2 . 3/16/2015
Katepatterson chapter 33 . 3/14/2015
I loved this story! I may have become addicted to it though seeing as I read it all in 2 days. Please right more! I think it's hilarious that you can right sexy scenes but yo bleep cuss words add character to your story!
Guest chapter 3 . 1/27/2015
I hate that nami is so annoying and nasty to Luffy because she's just making those make up's and all sorts of things to poor Luffy. I don't know can i keep reading this story if this keeps going on until the story ends. Sry but you just lose one reader here so goodbye! :( :b. :c
galunaknowsbest chapter 27 . 11/12/2014
id rather luffy as a girl
Monkey D. Luffy chapter 24 . 9/24/2014
Monkey D. Luffy chapter 6 . 9/23/2014
DAMN i can't believe what just read lol! serious Luffy having sex with Zoro was -_-...
crazzyredhead chapter 24 . 8/3/2014
i really hope they find the other child... that would be horrible to luffy if he-she didn't know
Admiral-Akainu chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
I love It Make More I wanna see luffy find out bout his other kids and also want him back as a female
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