|Reviews for Three|
| KianajLau chapter 7 . 12/7
AH SO BEAUTIFUL
BY FAR ONE OF MY MOST FAVORITE FANFICTIONS EVER
AAAAHHHHHHHHH SO CUTE
I loved Percy and Annebths story, duh, but I think I liked Eric and Rose’s the best. The meeting up with her just because he could was too cute. The Percabeth was just so sad! And Lizzy and Jamie’s story was also cute. UGH I love this!
I wanted to see what would happen when Percabeh finally remembered everything together, but this ending was just as good.
AND I LOVED SEEING LUKE
Seeing Chris would’ve been nice as well, though. Selena and Beckendorf...
| KianajLau chapter 2 . 12/7
awww, this was too cute. Your write so well and I love what you wrote about constellations.
| KianajLau chapter 1 . 12/7
I am crying. It was so hard especially when you began to describe Alzheimer’s
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/4
such a sad happy story... im legit crying right now... good job...
| Lucy Dragneel chapter 1 . 9/20
Oh my god. This literally made me cry. There are tears on my face right now.
| Eryniel Alasse chapter 7 . 9/8
Thank you for the excellent story! I loved seeing how the various incarnations of each character displayed qualities of the original, yet each was someone of their own. Well done, dear author!
| goldenlynx16 chapter 7 . 7/13
This was the best fanficition I've read, no kidding. In part three, I was waiting—hoping—for Annabeth to remember, to drink from the pool. I hoped Percy would remember when Thalia, said so—weird that in both their lives they remembered by a kiss? This fanfiction made me feel so strongly, unlike any other fanfiction before. I love it.
| MDH chapter 7 . 7/10
HELL FUCKING YEAH
| eding42 chapter 5 . 6/24
Oh my god. This is my all time favorite fanfiction.
The whole story was beautiful, but the Epilogue was a fucking masterpiece.
You managed to combine hope and sadness at the same time.
You beautifully managed to include Luke in the story.
I cried on the part about Alzheimer's. This story made me realize how horrible it is to live with it. This has opened up a whole new world for me.
I wish I could write this good.
I feel a personal connection to this story, one two fanfictions that have made me sob uncontrollably. (the other was Senescence by dreamingice, over on Archive of Our Own, check it out)
So many other authors absolutely destroy the Percy gets reincarnated prompt.
You have put so much energy, and power into simple words.
And the lines:
"I'm waiting for someone."
"No, Percy. Someone is waiting for you."
Absolutely mind blowing. It just fits the story so well.
Shit, I'm crying right now, my tears are splashing on the keyboard.
I've lost count of how many feels I've gotten.
You managed to add a little bit of fluff into Epilogue (just the right amount), but not make it too sappy.
Seriously, not many real authors can do it as well as you.
And the lines:
For once, they might have gotten lucky. But whp knows? He has really been lucky all along, if he looks at it in the right light. A long time ago - an extremely long time ago - she gave him a kiss for luck.
These lines made me think back to the "happy days" of PJO, with all of Rick Riordan's witty writing. It just ties up the fanfiction, so well.
By the way, over on Goodreads, Rick Riordan revealed that he has no other plans for PJO after the Trials of Apollo. I cried over that one too. It would be amazing, if he changed his mind, and wrote a book like this.
I started crying around the part about Percy getting Alzheimer's. I really like that part. It didn't fit Percy's heroic nature but was probably more realistic. And more tragic. At that point, I just skipped forward to the epilogue, which probably was a bad idea. I didn't get too sad about the epilogue the first time I read it. But, I went back and read the rest of the story, and finally read the epilogue for the second time, and everything just fit together so perfectly, and then I started sobbing, just sobbing my heart out.
The lines at the end of each segment, and the conversations between Luke and Annabeth, and the thoughts about catching up, talking, reuniting. Amazing, once again.
I hate how everyone just generalizes the fanfiction genre as porn and just crap. While that may be slightly true, I realized that sometimes, you can really find a diamond in the rough, a work of literary genius, such as this one.
You are the best writer ever.
Please, write more. This is amazing, all your stories are amazing.
So bittersweet at the end. As Jo said, they do need rest, after three lives of suffering.
Happily Ever After.
| eding42 chapter 6 . 6/24
So good. So good. Where do you get this inspiration?
I honestly wish that I could write this well.
It is extremely thought provoking, and goes very deep.
I think that the first chapter was just really sad, and the second and third sections were full of feels, not just sadness.
You have created a masterpiece. Many other authors don't quite express the "Percy is reincarnated" prompt correctly. This fanfic will hold a special place in my heart.
| eding42 chapter 7 . 6/23
ABSOLUTELY, MINDBLOWINGLY AMAZING
| eding42 chapter 1 . 6/23
My heart is broken. Shattered.
This is the second saddest fanfic I've read, after Senescence, over on Archive of Our Own (check it out)
But the death scene - I have tears in my eyes.
PLEASE I BEG YOU FINISH THIS STORY.
| Dollar1809 chapter 7 . 5/22
This was devastatingly beautiful, magically heartbreaking and insanely amazing...
I cried through the whole story.
| Amics chapter 7 . 3/22
Hands down best romance/family fanfiction on this website. It needs more recognition. Hats off to you my dude or girl ;D
| DarthDestroyer2 chapter 7 . 1/10
THE FREAKING BEST.