Reviews for Three
eding420 chapter 5 . 6/24
Oh my god. This is my all time favorite fanfiction.

The whole story was beautiful, but the Epilogue was a fucking masterpiece.

You managed to combine hope and sadness at the same time.

You beautifully managed to include Luke in the story.

I cried on the part about Alzheimer's. This story made me realize how horrible it is to live with it. This has opened up a whole new world for me.

I wish I could write this good.

I feel a personal connection to this story, one two fanfictions that have made me sob uncontrollably. (the other was Senescence by dreamingice, over on Archive of Our Own, check it out)

So many other authors absolutely destroy the Percy gets reincarnated prompt.

You have put so much energy, and power into simple words.

And the lines:

"I'm waiting for someone."
"No, Percy. Someone is waiting for you."

Absolutely mind blowing. It just fits the story so well.

Shit, I'm crying right now, my tears are splashing on the keyboard.

I've lost count of how many feels I've gotten.

You managed to add a little bit of fluff into Epilogue (just the right amount), but not make it too sappy.

Seriously, not many real authors can do it as well as you.

And the lines:

For once, they might have gotten lucky. But whp knows? He has really been lucky all along, if he looks at it in the right light. A long time ago - an extremely long time ago - she gave him a kiss for luck.

These lines made me think back to the "happy days" of PJO, with all of Rick Riordan's witty writing. It just ties up the fanfiction, so well.

By the way, over on Goodreads, Rick Riordan revealed that he has no other plans for PJO after the Trials of Apollo. I cried over that one too. It would be amazing, if he changed his mind, and wrote a book like this.

I started crying around the part about Percy getting Alzheimer's. I really like that part. It didn't fit Percy's heroic nature but was probably more realistic. And more tragic. At that point, I just skipped forward to the epilogue, which probably was a bad idea. I didn't get too sad about the epilogue the first time I read it. But, I went back and read the rest of the story, and finally read the epilogue for the second time, and everything just fit together so perfectly, and then I started sobbing, just sobbing my heart out.

The lines at the end of each segment, and the conversations between Luke and Annabeth, and the thoughts about catching up, talking, reuniting. Amazing, once again.

I hate how everyone just generalizes the fanfiction genre as porn and just crap. While that may be slightly true, I realized that sometimes, you can really find a diamond in the rough, a work of literary genius, such as this one.

You are the best writer ever.

Please, write more. This is amazing, all your stories are amazing.

So bittersweet at the end. As Jo said, they do need rest, after three lives of suffering.

Happily Ever After.
eding420 chapter 6 . 6/24
So good. So good. Where do you get this inspiration?

I honestly wish that I could write this well.

It is extremely thought provoking, and goes very deep.

I think that the first chapter was just really sad, and the second and third sections were full of feels, not just sadness.

You have created a masterpiece. Many other authors don't quite express the "Percy is reincarnated" prompt correctly. This fanfic will hold a special place in my heart.
eding420 chapter 7 . 6/23
ABSOLUTELY, MINDBLOWINGLY AMAZING
eding420 chapter 1 . 6/23
My heart is broken. Shattered.

This is the second saddest fanfic I've read, after Senescence, over on Archive of Our Own (check it out)

But the death scene - I have tears in my eyes.

PLEASE I BEG YOU FINISH THIS STORY.
Dollar1809 chapter 7 . 5/22
This was devastatingly beautiful, magically heartbreaking and insanely amazing...
I cried through the whole story.
Amics chapter 7 . 3/22
Hands down best romance/family fanfiction on this website. It needs more recognition. Hats off to you my dude or girl ;D
DarthDestroyer2 chapter 7 . 1/10
THE FREAKING BEST.
DarthDestroyer2 chapter 6 . 1/10
Yes! I thought they would never regain their memories! I totally see why you won for the Phoenix Awards!
DarthDestroyer2 chapter 4 . 1/10
James should know who Percy Jackson is... Percy was a hero of both wars!
DarthDestroyer2 chapter 3 . 1/10
So... Rose and Eric died after separation?
DarthDestroyer2 chapter 2 . 1/10
That was beautiful... I could see why you got the Phoenix award...
DarthDestroyer2 chapter 1 . 1/10
Excellent. I hate Alzheimer's. Serial killer. Worse than ISIS.
FaithfulShipper chapter 7 . 1/5
This story is absolutely beautiful, but the epilogue is a golden masterpiece. I rarely cry like this but -sobs- Having Thalia find them like that was also beautiful. But nothing compares to Luke and Annabeth. Or the way she remembers someone is supposed to find her and Luke says he always keeps his promises.
And last but not least.
"I'm waiting for someone."
"No, Percy. Someone is waiting for you."
Excuse me while I drown in my puddle of tears and the sheer beauty of this moment.
You started this fanfic in 2009, and today is 2017, and it is STILL affecting people. I truly truly hope you know this and are so so proud, because you have a talent.
Thank you for crafting this and sharing it with us.
Percabeth forever (through three liftetimes and then eternity)
RachaelSummer chapter 7 . 12/24/2016
I have to tell you, this was probably the hardest story I have ever read, only because I couldn't see the words. I started crying around Apples to Apples, and I didn't stop. This was so beautiful, heartbreaking and hopeful at the same time. It was such a joy to watch Percy and Annabeth fall in love over and over again.
Silverfyre16 chapter 7 . 10/6/2016
This story is so heart breaking and tear wrenching and it is just so deep. It combines infinite sadness and hope at the same time. Darn now I will be always sad when I think of this story! It has so mich emotional depth and reaches into all your heart and shows the posibilities of life and showing that yes, destiny has a plan for you.
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