|Reviews for Time After Time|
| job chapter 17 . 7/17/2011
still waiting for an update…
| heyitsme2003 chapter 17 . 5/19/2011
Have truly enjoyed your writing. 'Time after Time' has kept my attention, without the usual dry points in most stories.
Awaiting the next few chapters.
| denizkizi chapter 17 . 1/30/2011
Where're you sarrie5? Please update
| DayDreamer077 chapter 17 . 1/23/2011
hmm! she's starting to feel something again for House. lol. I know it. lol.
| Hameron77 chapter 17 . 9/21/2010
Awesome chapter !
| AllyCameron chapter 17 . 9/19/2010
Amazing new chapter, thanks for the update!
| Alece chapter 17 . 9/18/2010
Yay! I love this story SOOOOOOOO much! I love that House is realizing that Cameron isn't trying to change him, that she has accepted him. And I love Cameron needing reassurance/comfort on a bad day and turning to House. I can't wait for more :)
| ShipperCrazed - FanFicCrazy chapter 16 . 7/25/2010
Loving the fic. It's moving very very slow as far as the romance between House and Cameron are concerned. In fact he really hasn't shown much care or attraction toward her yet. Starting to worry me. Although it is probably most realistic of how their relationship would progress. Looking forward to many many many more chapters. One thing, I don't quite understand House's answer in this last chapter?
| schrodingers cat 13 chapter 16 . 7/22/2010
I'm really glad to see a new chapter, especially one that is this good.
I love this sentence:
So he stopped trying to find a definition for their mutual inability to let go. - Actually, "mutual inability to let go" is a perfect definition of what they have.
I was trying to figure out what is THE thing that makes this story so special. It feels more grown-up in a way than most of the others and it reads more like a true novels or even a slice of life. There's this "gravity of life" that is felt and House and Cameron don't fell like your puppets or something for your own or our amusement. Instead, you set them in this environment which has all of the characteristics of a real world and let them interact with it and each other. This way, the characters feel more life-like, 3-dimensional instead of just words on the paper.
If I had to single out just one thing, then it wouldn't be plot. There are many angsty plots and most of them will just focus on being overly emotional, no matter what it takes. Great for a catharsis, but too... exaggerated. It's also not the dialogue. Your dialogue is great. Very in character, eloquent, witty when necessary, you even discuss medicine; but there's other writers who also write great dialogues.
I think it's the descriptions. They're just so "rich". People will write descriptions of actions and characters' thoughts and that's what it will be and you'll see it as such. You, on the other hand, fuse everything together, which creates a beautiful flow and makes you keep reading. That, and the fact that you include some ingenious introspections and phrasings, while covering a great variety of themes and motifs.
But then, it might just be all of the above and then some. :)
What I know is that when chapters are this long, I don't always bother reading every single word but rather skim through them. When I read yours, I read every single word.
I give praise when deserved, but don't get too used too such long monologues. :)
I will very impatiently await the next chapter.
| Alece chapter 16 . 7/21/2010
She better have meant them! Good for Cameron, making him answer the damn question for once. I can't wait for more!
| AllyCameron chapter 16 . 7/21/2010
It's cute that he tries to protect her, she means a lot to him, obviously :)
| Alece chapter 15 . 7/1/2010
Loved this chapter! The bit about the 4 year old being serious about marrying Cameron because he gave her his car was great!"Never as a question if you can be hurt by the answer" - so House! The offer from House was heart-warming, but would have gone awry if accepted, good job Cameron! I love the way you're taking the rebuilding of their relationship slow and making it work for them. Can't wait for more!
| schrodingers cat 13 chapter 15 . 6/21/2010
Very nice. It's good to see some progress in their relationship. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
| Super-special-awesome Pirate chapter 15 . 6/20/2010
Took me a while to finally read all of the chapters.
I'm glad I did though. It's an amazing stories, sure
there's a couple of grammer and spelling mistakes but
when isn't there?
So they're finally getting close and comfy...again.
well now its getting even more interesting than
before. I cant wait to read the next chapter.
| AllyCameron chapter 15 . 6/20/2010
Great writing! The fact that Cameron is still Chase's medical proxy really bothers House, hehe...