|Reviews for Eyes|
| Emma P chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
This poem you've written is fantastic.
It has all the key components a good one needs.
My favorite two are The Aqua eyes and the Charcoal eyes.
When you said her eyes glint like gems I think you could've just said them.
This poem also made me a little sad. You really have a natural knack for words
| OTGIRL46 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
you should write more stories or poems it was GREAT!