Reviews for Eyes
Emma P chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
This poem you've written is fantastic.

It has all the key components a good one needs.

My favorite two are The Aqua eyes and the Charcoal eyes.

When you said her eyes glint like gems I think you could've just said them.

This poem also made me a little sad. You really have a natural knack for words
OTGIRL46 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
you should write more stories or poems it was GREAT!