|Reviews for Where It All Began|
| Lillywhite1 chapter 1 . 3/10
Sad Story. Thanks for writing this.
| KateWinters97 chapter 1 . 11/28/2016
This made me so sad...but I loved this story and it was the perfect ending! Thank you so much for writing this! You made me fall in love with the characters all over again.
| k1942 chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
A very sweet sendoff for her beloved father, and quite fitting. It was no surprise that Bella cried tears for her dad! A lovely, lovely wrap up!
| EdwardandAliceLover9 chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
I got so depressed reading that. Magnificent job.
| BridieM chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
Loved this O/S. Thank you. :D
| xshynenstarx chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Aw. The touch about who Angela named her twins after was great. And I love that Charlie knew Bella was watching at the doing and funeral.
| cela whitney chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
lovely story, thank you.
| liz.scissom chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
I really like your style of writing it flows so easily. I must admit I cry when I read your writings, I am able to feel the emotions of the characters. I hope you continue to write more stories I will keep watch.
| twivampsalvatore chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
So sad :'(
| LAB1 chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I'm glad she got to see Charlie one last time and he knew she was there before for his wedding.
| Angeldolphin01 chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
*grabs a box of tissue* I love it. I cried because it is sad but I love it.
| alextraviolet chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Sitting here reading this made me cry. Hate when people have to die but, we all will go one day. Great story
| edwards-girl-4-ever chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
I enjoyed this, will there be more chapters to it?
I liked the original as well.
| tookeeluv chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Beautifully done... thanks for the read.
| cullen-lover4ever chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
oh my god! i cried like a baby with this story! it truly toucht me! WOW is al i can say!