Reviews for Future Loop Foundation
love fanfiction chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
I don't think this story isn't one of your best
DeeaE chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
O.o i freaking loved this storyy
Delicate Desires chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Whoa, there's some mind screwing going on here. o: Cool fic!
XxTenshixX chapter 1 . 12/17/2009

So angsty there! This is bound to make your readers think. Hard.

oh, and its a compliment. Good luck on the contest! :P

Ja ne!
Alex the Ninth chapter 1 . 12/10/2009

Good luck with the contest!
Kiinari chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
I'm looped out by future loop foundation. 8l

'Don't think. Just open your eyes.'


How ironic.

Pochi Saku-Hime chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
... wierd/ But cool X3 lol
Thirrin73 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Wow, there is just so much hidden meaning behind this story.

I have just two words for you:

Well done.








Nah. I got some more.

This was fantastic! Such a perfect world which crumbled into chaos. This was beautiful in a way. I can barely begin to express everything I found amazing.

Good luck in the contest Miss Winner-From-Last-Contest.

Ja ne,

VesperChan chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Amazing...0.0 that was stunning, particularly with the theme of a new world order in the future that makes the world into a socialized community without personality. I love stories like that that bring the doom and gloom into the future.

The ending kind of reminded me of the matrix where the people were awake but really asleep all the time and Sakura was like Neo or Trinity. Her saving Pein was amazing and the confrontation between her an Madara was well done, likewise.

My absolute favorite part in the entire story was the end where it flowed off the pages like silk. It was so well written that I couldn't help but utterly adore it.

"Somewhere in between the ground falling beneath her and the sky swallowing the remnants of humanity, for the first time in 900 years, her heart stopped beating. Although maybe it hadn’t been beating in the first place."


Oh yeah, and thank you for entering my contest, you're the very first participant and the only one at this point. Good luck!

Vesper chan
GoonieLove chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
Weird. But oddly enjoyable.