Reviews for Eternal Geass Moon: The Garden of Sinners
Republic Che chapter 22 . 10/8/2016
I hope you update this story some day!
Please Update chapter 22 . 4/13/2015
I just finished reading this story and it's awesome! I know this story stalled on December 21, 2010, but could you please update this fantastic story!
Aern chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
This is definitely one of the best stories on the site!
Asuka Langley chapter 22 . 3/17/2014
Red hair...
Blue eyes...

Guest chapter 3 . 3/5/2014
Why exactly does C.C. fight like Shirou? The conversation at the end seemed to hint at something.
Crow667 chapter 14 . 12/11/2013
damn this stoy is so epic i dont think there exists a word to express its awesomness, you didnt kill kaguya right? shiki and mana meeting...britannia is screwed. by the way that "mirage knight" and "magical meido luluko" exist in some form or is it just for this fic? keep up the good work!
Crow667 chapter 9 . 12/6/2013
so hes nanaya and not tohno huh? mystic eyes of life perception? like roa'? and damn he trained as demon hunter? oooh is he going to join with the black knights? what about him meeting mana? what would you think would be his reaction? heh keep up the good work! on the side if you had to give a theme song for shiki and mana what song would you choose?
Crow667 chapter 2 . 12/3/2013
no i dont remember what happened to Rai i dont know japanesse and there is no english patch yet
Crow667 chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
hm had me fooled there for a while when you mentioned "daughter of satsujinki" i inmediately tought of tohno tough mentioning mana ryogi cleared that up for me. your stories are so awesome keep up the good work!
ImmortalSheep chapter 22 . 1/22/2013
Amazing fic, and I have never seen a Mana/Lelouch pairing before and you defenetly pulled it off.
Yikari chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Hello there!

A solid first chapter - curiousity enticed! And, by the way, that was the most smooth and unsuspected insertion of feline qualities' appreciation I've seen. I've got a good laugh.

Not much to add at this point, I'm afraid, so I'll see you on the other side.

Good luck!

Granten chapter 5 . 8/3/2012
Milly seems rather cold considering that she's his old friend, secretly pining for him and she's just admitted that she has knowledge of things that could get him killed (if he's lucky). It seems rather improbable that Kallen could suddenly start using magic, even people with great potential usually can't do anything in Nasuverse unless they know how.
Lastly a bit more detail for when Lelouch activated his ability during his conversation with Milly* would have spared you from having to repeat that she was under its power two extra times.

*And from the KnK novels the unified language doesn't seem to behave like his Geass where simply asking the question with it ensures obedience.
Granten chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
I'm afraid that I have to criticize Suzaku's opening piece here. The author shouldn't 'tell' the reader that someone is being stupid, the author should 'show' the reader through actions and dialogue written in a believable manner.
Riverlia chapter 21 . 2/19/2012
I really like the writing, and the influence of Nasu writing was nice. Still, wasn't the training arc overly long?

The better you write, the more agonizing the wait is, because I keep wanting to know what will happen to Lulu once the training end.
Riverlia chapter 5 . 2/18/2012
Oh damn, the first few serious chapters lured me into a sense of security, thinking this is a fic that was safe to read while drinking tea.

Now I has to wipe the tea off my LCD and glasses...

The humor was not overly hilarious, but it was enough. The same style as Type Moon in these down time-scene

Good job
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