|Reviews for Going into Shock|
| JustARead chapter 4 . 1/8
| JustARead chapter 2 . 1/8
HEA all around
| JustARead chapter 1 . 1/8
Well that worked out
| my 2 guys chapter 5 . 1/1/2013
that was good keep it up
| janosch73 chapter 5 . 6/17/2012
| 7 Ace chapter 3 . 11/8/2011
What the hell? Jake's jealous?
Jasper pleasured himself thinking about Bella and Edward? . WOW...
HAHA Jacob/Bella/Edward ...*shakes thoughts away* *not working, melts*
HAHA telling Charlie will be hilarious!
How will Carlisle and Esme react to the two three-person relationships?
| 7 Ace chapter 2 . 11/8/2011
Bella is definitely taking this well...hell, who wouldn't? Married to a hot vampire and then another one joining you? Damn...she's lucky.
| 4CullensandaBlack chapter 4 . 3/19/2011
hot hot hot
| Deanne Marie Cullen chapter 5 . 2/5/2011
I am in absolute awe of your work! thank you so much for sharing your talent with me/us!
| chavamirjam chapter 4 . 1/21/2011
Whoa, at first I thought Charlie was given a little TMI, but didn't see that twist coming... The flashback also nicely summarizes their feelings. Great!
Don't know why you say in the summary there's no plot, I think there is
| chavamirjam chapter 3 . 1/21/2011
Very nice :)
I like Jasper as a sub and I enjoyed reading with their vocality and all!
And don't get me wrong, I liked all of chapter 1 as well! (And 2)
| chavamirjam chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
Finally I made it to start the Going into Shock series (remember, I was a bit thick to get the order right, we exchanged a few PMs).
I've only read the prequel, will save the rest for tomorrow.
Found it very hot, very sexy :) Didn't expect Jasper to be so sensitive though, I thought he would've approved and had you turn it into a foursome ;)
On a less sex-crazed level, I found the twists in relationships you did intriguing.
Tiny criticism: the second lemon seemed a little repetitive in choice of words.
And two logical mistakes, I think cos I had to re-read to understand: the last sentence in the last paragraph (Jasper...) and in the third last paragraph,last sentence I guess it should say "I run off..." instead of "she runs off...".
I hope I do not appear over-picky, it's just now at the end I stumbled over these sentences.
Will continue tomorrow!
| KareBear1965 chapter 4 . 1/2/2011
I loved it...
| mikkimousie chapter 4 . 11/2/2010
lol fun and cutee
| wendy1969 chapter 4 . 11/1/2010
this is a gr8 fic.