This was wonderful! The feelings, the descriptions, the characterizations... I loved them all. And the chant during sex? Priceless.

Very well written. Alistair's internal struggle was spot on.

Dear lord, why am I crying?

I'm so glad I kept scouring for Alistair/Cousland fics. This has got to be one of the best written stories I've read all day. I'm glad it was one of the last, too; everything else would have paled in comparison. Everything else really DOES pale in comparison.

That made my stomach swoop, and in this case swooping is good! Really loved this!

That made my stomach swoop, and in this case swooping is good! Really loved this!

I find Alistair to pair up well with anyone if it's written properly. Good job! Very cute.

That was lovely, and awkward, but mostly lovely!

I laughed all the way through, poor Alistair. You really did a wonderful job with this fic, it's going straight to my favourites.

funny, awkward, and adorable in all the right places lol

This was fantastic. Just magnificent. Well done.

"It's my hair, isn't it?" he asked, tracing a finger down Elissa's cheek. "Women just can't resist my hair." Haha that made me laugh :) Very cute story I loved it! Great job.

Oh, this was lovely and sweet and everything charming. Also hot :)

""You know, Zevran," Elissa said calmly, her fingers never once pausing, "I've always wondered why the very first Antivan phrase my tutor had ever taught me was 'Thank you, I'm not interested'. Followed closely by 'Please go away'. Now I understand.""

That made me laugh SO much - and the comment about Alistair and cheese being soulmates haha! So true - but we still love him regardless lol. Brilliant writing, love your style and the dialogue you got going :D

I have no words, this was really great. Awesome charactrization without falling into the obvious and dayumn... that's how you write some smexy time :D while still staying true to the characters and letting it become way more than just a sex scene. Really loved it, one of my favourites around here.

That was sweet and funny. Like how you used the game given names to! You do Alistair really well.