|Reviews for A Moment Too Late Pete!|
| cypher404 chapter 4 . 6/10/2010
:/ okay i will eagerly waiting for your next chapter
| cypher404 chapter 3 . 6/10/2010
lol nice work with the news thingy its a epic. at this rate your gonna be my best fanfic writer for this anime .
| cypher404 chapter 2 . 6/10/2010
thinking that man was pete in disguise will be too much paranoidism for tazusa's charecter but i think it could be if she misses him a lot
| cypher404 chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
nice start i mean the first chapter is totally awsome . you fully picked the part where the god always makes sudden suprising decisions for pete and the coach always telling tazusa to focus on skating also you picked tazusa's charecter well . i give ya 10/10 on the first chapter
| sd chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
plzzz! continue this story
| StoryCurrentlyUntitled chapter 4 . 4/1/2010
Hey! I think that so far ir's great and I can't wait to read more of it! Good luck with school and the award! The only thing is...and I'm only trying to be helpful because I had one of my readers say the same to me. When each different person speaks you should put their words into a new paragraph. It's just to avoid confusion as to whom is speaking. But it really was good and funny. I can't wait to see what will happen to Pete and Tazusa in this story you've got going! Again, good luck with everything!
| polkadots chapter 3 . 2/22/2010
c'mon finish it up
| cottoncandyFRIZZ chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
Nice story you got there, Pia-Chan...