|Reviews for A Betting Man|
| Scattycow chapter 4 . 2/28
So the only thing good enough for this used up skank is a 24 year old untouched virgin to teach him the error of his ways? ? Good Lord! The double standards are comical.
| Scattycow chapter 1 . 2/28
Yeah. On a mission to be an idiot!
| irelandk chapter 34 . 1/21
| Guest chapter 27 . 1/11
Ya Bella I'm sure that Edward would have just handed over his company LOL. Like that was a binding agreement...LOL
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/11
Emmett says "you might should even. . ."
Just a little editing issue!
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/11
Weird that Bella is all hurt. She knew from the fucking get go that Edward was a whore and only with her for the bet. So now, at the end of all this she's hurt because? She should have had NO EXPECTATION of a happy ending.
Its like she expected to make him fall in love with her this whole time. Which I think she did by her thought process. But she kept saying stupid shit like, she knew it was just for a bet etc. We all knew she didn't act like it. From the very beginning she was just begging to get hurt. She really was stupid about this whole thing.
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/10
Why does bella still continue to pretend that shes pretending? WE ALL KNEW SHE WASNT PRETENDING from the fucking get go! So 20 chapters of her acting like she doesn't want him and saying hes just messing with him etc is just...so fucking old at this point.
And Edward? What a emotional fucktard.
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/10
Hes twenty nine year old man you can hardly put his slutty ways onto some issue he had with his birth mom.
I'm rolling my eyes right now!
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/10
So Edward has a few girls that he fucks regularly (he said lauran was ONE of a few) AND he has one night stand too.
We saw that the night he met bella...that's a lot of different women. How does this guy not have kids...oh that's right he wouldn't even know if he did, one night stand and all. Does he have stds?
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/10
You want us to believe that? Edward is what 29? And you want us to believe that hes NEVER wanted to kiss a girl twice? Yet he fucks anything that walks?
sigh...this story is getting dumber and dumber Are we also going with the "I don't kiss on the mouth thing"? Cause obviously kissing is more intimate then licking someone privates LOL. I hate it when stories try to pull that shit.
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/9
Emmett usually meets woman that are tigers in bed with no SUSTENANCE? LOL How did you miss that is editing? OMG
I'm sure the word your looking for is SUBSTANCE. But it was funny and made your supporting character come off as a moron
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/9
I wish she'd stop calling him Eduardo. All I can picture is some sleazy looking short dude that wears womens blouses.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/9
Bella is an adult right? But she acts like a fucking child...like omg my favorite movie of ALL TIME is Grease!
? Is she a 13 year old? Edward doesn't act much better. bella bites her lip, he gets an erection. Bella straddles him he gets an erection. She sucks on her finger, he gets an erection. Hes like teen just figuring shit out.
This story is getting worse and worse. Id like adults to act like adults!
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/9
every five seconds bella is liking this piece of shit more and she just notices it, then immediately ignores it and acts like shes in control. Do you really want her to come off this...stupid? Because she really does.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/9
Edward thinks that Bella is "witty". ...Did she say something witty in the last 5 chapters? How could I have missed that?
I like the note at the end of chapter 5, you say that shes only known him for 2 days and that hes still a manwhore. As if he will ever stop being a whore. You cant lessen how many people youve been with. So once a whore, ALWAYS A WHORE. Ya you might not fuck as many people but youve still fucked ALOT of people. SEE? once a whore, always a whore.