Thanks!

I enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!

Poor Bella! But I do think that Edward is really starting to fall for her!

Will he ever 'fess up to her about the bet? Then what?

This is fun! I think manwhore Edward is in for a big surprise!

Overall, good story. I don’t think Edward had a good reason for the bet. I think he sort of got off too easy. Winning the bet and getting Bella in the end. His behavior was disgusting and the way he treated women in the past was gross too and he just sort of got everything in the end with no consequences.

I think the timeline is a little off. They’ve been dating for two weeks not one.

The fact that he accepted an invite from Lauren is proof that this is only a bet to him and he’s a gross douche

She needs to break it off with him. This is just gross.

It was cool at first, because honestly, he deserves this for betting on fucking with women, but now I think it’s just dumb. She needs to blow him off. He’s a douche, and she’s really only hurting herself.

wtf rose is so annoying

Me encanto esta historia! Fue súper linda. Me encanto leerla.
Edward y bella hacen una linda pareja :)
Esta historia va para mis favoritos

This was an incredible story, and awesome ending, though I would love a future shot of them, should you ever want to return to this story.

Wow, now we know why Edward was a douche, but he really needs to realize that Alice is an adult.

Though I would like to see James degraded and skinned, I can understand that you don’t want to write about him in your story.

Hmm, I’m surprised Lauren was a decent person here, when she could have been a clingy bitch.