Reviews for The Unexpected Attraction
painted heart chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
Please update
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
this was a good short chapter I thought I wonder if Edward is with Tanya why he stayed away so long. Seems like Jasper and Bella like each other. That is sad about Alice, I wonder how they lost her to death. Thank you once again and have a good week.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
tat was messed up especially because of alice ...poor alice
radix chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
That was amazing
JasperandKendallrmine4ever chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
JJ Twi1ight chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Really great job. Jasper and Bella is certainly a different couple (especially written in character), but I thought you made it work. You really are a fantastic writer, you capture the excitement and "naughtiness" of each relationship that you write.
Monica chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Wow! Great, so far
VP4444 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
hey amazing story. i hope that you will update soon. bye!
MakeYourBodyaCanvas chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
PLZ contuine
AmberHale chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
please continue this story has great potential
anny2010 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
do another chapter soooooooooooo ucie nice story keep it up with asper and bella lemons.
vamp69lover chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
i hope your working on chapter 2! LOVE IT!
Analitica chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
please update soon i cannot wait for more
ThatChickThereCharron chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
i really really like it so far ;P and i cant wait to read more plz update soon
Nissa-Cullen chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
I really liked this chapter. Is there going to be more. I could see how you could make a story out of it. It was very well written too. What happened to Alice? It said she died but not how. Why is Edward in Denali? Is it really to protect Bella or is he doing a little recreation activity? I hope to find out.
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