Reviews for Elemental: Of Air and Water
crazycats7 chapter 5 . 9/16
Very good but I would have like to know more of what Edward was thinking. Like when Lauren told Bella about her mother, and then what he was thinking about his Grandparents; especially his grandfather's attitude toward Bella. Also when they were starting the ritual and Bella said about a better way then the way Carlisle wanted to do it.
michigangal0223 chapter 5 . 2/25
sweet :)
Nannyjojo chapter 5 . 12/25/2016
I loved reading Edwards pov.
He was an Ass at first but for good reason.
He came good in the end.
Nannyjojo chapter 4 . 12/25/2016
Well he really does only have himself to blame.
Loved Alice's insight.
Nannyjojo chapter 3 . 12/24/2016
Wow.
I wanted to cry for Edward.
Hate seeing him in pain.
But it was worth it in the end.
Nannyjojo chapter 2 . 12/24/2016
I think that was part of the imprint working in a way.
The elements working together.
Edward really was an Ass.
Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
I love hearing from Edward.
It's true what they say, never judge a book by its cover although I can see why Edward would be a little hesitant seeing what he has been told.
Sassy Mami chapter 5 . 12/10/2016
Thanks for the wonderful stories. But I was wondering if you could add a o/s about when Edward learned the truth about the Renee, Esme and Carlisle triangle.
twiclare chapter 5 . 11/17/2016
I'm glad he realise what an ass he'd been to her in the beginning! Loved hearing Edward's point of view!
Kelly457 chapter 5 . 9/15/2016
This is incomplete. Or maybe I'm just pedantic. I liked the POV but I was left unsatisfied.
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 5 . 1/10/2016
Awesome!
Elvire23 chapter 5 . 12/27/2015
Thank you for sharing both of these stories. I enjoyed them both so much.
Elvire23 chapter 3 . 12/25/2015
I don't think he understands that his previous actions towards Bella aren't erased just because they are now mated.
Elvire23 chapter 2 . 12/25/2015
I still think he's an ass, so full of himself.
Elvire23 chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
He's such a prick.
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