Reviews for Elemental: Of Air and Water
Neumzie chapter 5 . 12/7/2011
well i immensely enjoyed this, thank you for writing it! the only complaint i have is that i wish it were longer lol
michelly1 chapter 3 . 11/28/2011
So happy you gave us EPOV for these chapters... great job
michelly1 chapter 5 . 11/28/2011
Loved it.
Liz Ben chapter 5 . 11/24/2011
heh.- "I want you in me"..(jesus).. -suddenly witchward became christian?

lovely story. tiny glitch, no prob.

that lemon was very realistic.

disjointed thoughts, yet have great admiration for your writing.
xIGiveUpx chapter 5 . 11/8/2011
This chapter was perfect. So powerful, emotional and lovely. Loved EPOV.
livinamk chapter 5 . 10/29/2011
Awh... So sweet! Great outtakes from epov, loved them!
teleshawna chapter 5 . 9/13/2011
This chapter makes me want to read the entire story again. One of my all time favs. Thank you!
Sol Spell Diggory chapter 5 . 9/8/2011
God... It took me so long to be able to read this little great fic!

Loved it as much as I loved Elemental. Never thought of what Edward might have been thinking in the begining!

But loved it anyway! So beautiful.
SomebodySaveMe1998 chapter 5 . 9/5/2011
I think it would be better if you added a couple of more chapters in Edward's POV, instead of just skipping to the end like that.
jahluv18 chapter 5 . 9/1/2011
I love that you made this it makes the whole story so much better now that we can see how edwards mind was working
NKubie chapter 3 . 8/25/2011
I loved reading this from the EPOV! Perhaps shouldn't have done it at work, but still. Really good!
NKubie chapter 2 . 8/25/2011
I had sort of wondered why Edward seemed so cold toward Bella. These first two chapters gave me a lot of insight. It makes more sense now.
chat noire chapter 5 . 8/19/2011
this is really good! A lot of times while I was reading Elemental I kept on wondering what Edwards thoughts were. I really wish that you would re-write Elemental, all of it in Edwards POV. A sequel would also be appreciated :D
I-am-happy here chapter 5 . 8/12/2011
This was beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us!
mcamastow chapter 5 . 8/11/2011
its great how they built there bond.
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