|Reviews for Deep Dish outtake Meet Me in Chicago|
| psyfilover chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
| obsessedmom chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Love the outtake! I hope there will be more.
I have gotta ask...
Was the alliteration/homophone intentional?
Jack Charles J.C. Jacey ?
| Elicullen26 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
This was amazing, so hawt, the first intentional encounter that they had and the real beginning of their relationship.
You are absolutely right, Nishe by Muse is the hottest thing I've ever heard, so sensual and it goes so well with the scene...*sigh*
Can't wait to read more of DD, this boys own me.
Have a great week!
| Lori94 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
You write one HELL of an outtake! Love it!
| Kats Flower Girls chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
This was so hot! I love Jacey & Jack together!
| radiate689 chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
| The.Dragonfly.Lover chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Oh my God. Hot as it can get, while still being meaningful. I love this outtake, and the story it came from!
| Rosmarina chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
M, I love Jack and Jacey. So hot! I want them together. :)
| pftp chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Love this line:
It doesn’t have to be anything we don’t want it to be Jacey.
Whew, that was *HOT*.
| ppinecone chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
I have now re-read this a ton of times and cannot believe I never reviewed this! Shame on me!
And gah, THE WINDOW! I am falling hardcore for Jack & Jacey.
| Jane's Rage chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Our boys have such potential. I hope they work out.
| SexyBelle chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
they are so perfect together ...
| turtlegirl92201 chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Ack...how am I just now seeing this? Dang and it's notification failures!
Can I just say how completely HOT this outtake was? I mean, dang girl...talk about scorching the sheets...these two boys together are a fire hazard! This section was almost too hot to read:
"Lowering my upper body so that our lengths are flush with each other, I hook my hands under his shoulders and lie my cheek against the back of his neck. “You’re so fucking tight, Jacey,” I murmur into his ear, the strain of my arousal roughening my voice. “You’re so hot, so tight…you take my cock so well.” He moans. “Such a sweet boy…love fucking your beautiful ass…” His face is no longer returning to its slack expression now – his eyes are clamped shut, his mouth open as he is approaching the point of no return. I bring one hand down from his shoulders to slide it in under his hips so I can hold his cock."
There's just something about Jack Charles talking dirty that gets to me...guh!
You know, up to this point I've been fairly neutral when it comes to who I want Jack to be with in this story. Jacey, Mike...I haven't really had a strong opinion. After this though, I have to say I'm leaning more towards Jacey. The more I see them together, the more they grow on me. I can't wait to read more.
I'm so loving DD and you at this moment...
| naelany chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
wow, very sexy _
| Linzzer220 chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
that was amazing! i really love these characters and still have to catch up with chapter 4, but i loved this one. Them realizing that they want more that there's something more to them just hooking up. Off to read ch. 4 :)