|Reviews for Love Endures All Things|
| fefe428 chapter 25 . 5/3/2010
I am so glad that you opted to let both of the babies survive. I totally understand your first instinct to only allow one of them to actually be born alive, but from a strictly sentimental point of view I was really hoping for the so-called "happy ending" where the twins are concerned.
I also like your sense of irony in having Elizabeth stricken with the same complication that Sam had during Baby Lila's delivery.
I am anxious to see how Ric finally gets his commeupence so to speak, since he so deserves to suffer for all of his terrible manipulations. I am also intrigued as to how you are going to handle Elizabeth's final outcome. I really hope that you have choose to have her finally shown for the manipulative jealous liar that she is.
I can't wait to read the on...
| fefe428 chapter 22 . 5/3/2010
I like the way you've written this Victor character. I'm glad to see that you have him standing up to Ric and not caving to his insinuations. However, I do suspect that there are bad things ahead for the young man.
The scene in Dr. Lee's office was so touching, and I just love how you're having her see Jason from this different perspective basically allowing her to see what it is that has the women in his life fall so hard for him despite his darker side. I just really hope that both of the babies are able to be born. It will be terribly gut wrenching to lose one of them now that they've become so real to Sam and Jason.
As for the scene with Elizabeth, I just think the way you're writing Sam's concern for Jason's role in Jake's life is true to the way that she would have handled the situation had the writers opted to have her find out about it instead of Jason telling her that awful lie. It's true to who these characters are and the strength of their love and commitment. Well done!
I can't wait to read on!
| forever babe chapter 26 . 5/2/2010
I love love love you for having Elizabit#$ outside the door hearing Sam's screams! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH ROFLMFAO! Awesome chapter I'm so excited about what happens next but I feel bad for Lucky.
| shortie990 chapter 25 . 4/24/2010
Lol, so okay I finally was able to catch up on your story! Love all the drama and suspense and very happy that the twins are both going to make it! 3
Keep it up!
| fefe428 chapter 20 . 4/20/2010
I just love the way your depicting and building the relationship between Sam, Alexis and Kristina. I'm glad you opted to have Sam find out about Alexis' actual condition and go with her to the clinic. I do find it ironic that you opted to have Elizabeth violate HIPAA regulations with the District Attorney. Since I actually work in health care and find the violation of HIPAA inexcusable under any circumstances I would have preferred that Carly actually report her and force her to face the consequences of her actions, especially when she was being so petty and jealous about Sam showing her ring to that other nurse. However, I understand that this obviously would not enhance the story's direction or plot. I am glad you did point out how serious an infraction this is on the part of a healthcare worker though. I can't wait until you make your next update. I am completely hooked now!
| fefe428 chapter 18 . 4/20/2010
Outstanding chapter! I must admit your choice of the second song, was interesting...to say the least. While I understand the choice from the lyrical standpoint, it's hard to picture Jason actually listening to hip-hop. That said...I went with the whole "suspension of disbelief" theory on that one. Isn't that what we soap lovers often have to do anyway? I loved your choice of Diane as the M.C. and that you opted to give them a very traditional wedding reception with all of the usual events i.e. the introduction of the family, the cake cutting, and the garter and bouquet tosses. While these are all things that Jason would normally detest, clearly this was the type of wedding that Sam pictured as a little girl and I think it's very in character for him to tolerate this type of reception in order to make her happy...WELL DONE!
Needless to say, I loved the way you depicted Elizabeth's reaction to finding out that they were married and enjoyed that it was Carly who got to deliver the one-two punch about the wedding and the babies.
| fefe428 chapter 17 . 4/20/2010
I am incredibly impressed with the amount of research you put into your writing. I was floored when I read that you are not catholic. I was impressed enough with just the information on the jewels and what the stones represented, but in order to know that much about a catholic wedding you must have had to really research it along with the appropriate bible readings. Your attention to detail is just astounding!
| fefe428 chapter 14 . 4/20/2010
Love the way you're writing the relationship between Sam and Carly! It's exactly the way I would like to see these two.
| fefe428 chapter 8 . 4/20/2010
A very well written!
| fefe428 chapter 7 . 4/20/2010
I am really enjoying your story so far, but I have to say that your writing of this chapter was so well done. It seems that often writers take their "smut" just a little too far. Don't get me wrong, I love and appreciate a little "excitement" in my stories, but you've managed to balance the romantic aspect of the scene while using less vulgarity than is often used for what I think ends up to be a much more enjoyable and realistic scene. I also appreciate that you have few if any typo's in your writing and you use proper grammar and spelling. There is nothing that turns me off of a story more than writers who can't spell or have grammatical errors in every other sentence. It makes me crazy! I can't wait to read more!
| forever babe chapter 25 . 4/14/2010
Talk about an emotional roller coaster girlfriend! YEESH!
You had me talking to you while I was reading asking what the bleep bleep were you thinking killing our baby? Ugh the angst! I complain but i secretly love it because how boring would 25 plus chapters be if it was was all goodness and light? Loved that it was so long I kept reading and looking at the position of the scoll and saying okay lots more so she's gotta have some happy in here for me and you did not disapoint me at all! Big props for your skills as a writer and your ability to keep the reader (me) engaged you really should think about writing fanfiction for Stephanie Plum and Ranger Manoso (the Plum series) You have to read books one through 12 before starting but you would make an excellent BABE writer feel free to read my favorite stories after you read books 1-12 PM me if your interested in the series I'll tell you all about it! You rock loved the chapter!
| christie2484 chapter 25 . 4/14/2010
CJ, you had me on the edge of my seat for like 30 mins, thats how long it took me to read this wonderful update! At first I was all 'ah' no she didnt.. no she didnt! I wanted to bawl, poor Jase... I felt so bad for him...*sniff* Very nice of you to keep BOTH little JaSammers alive and kicking...ya know whats good for you lady.. you do not wanna upset the stalking squad *snicker*
You are AWESOME, REALLY are... I could almost feel Jason's desperation... and his pain... it was just AMAZING!
Looking forward to the next update! I feel a coughing fit coming up REALLY son hahaha... hey BTW why on earth havent you posted this at DT or TH? huh huh why why why
Kudos my friend...EXCELLENT JOB
| BE1313 chapter 24 . 4/5/2010
I loved this chapter with the exception of Elizabeth. I think that Jason should find out that her baby(idk if you're still gonna keep him named Jake) isn't his. And I think that Jason in character would probably kill Ric for telling Sam and upsetting her to the point where she might lose the babies, but yeah this is longer and more complicated than I meant, just wanted to say that I really liked it and can;t wait for the next update.
| forever babe chapter 24 . 4/5/2010
Okay so I'm hoping Sam was just acting and that she really is in on Jason's plan and they are just setting Ric up to think he succeded. Please don't let her lose those babies and Lucky should save his own wife for once! I am sick and tired of Jason going to that two faced, whore, who always thinks she's innocent, and blames everyone one else for her problems, liar liar pants on fire BITC%! Great chapter.
| forever babe chapter 23 . 3/25/2010
Fantastic chapter I can't wait to see Ric, Elizabit #, and Alcazar get what they deserve!