|Reviews for Endlessly|
| Baka-chan chapter 12 . 1/1
That was amazing, i loved the style of writting you wrote in, second person i think :S it really helped to involve you in the story. :)
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/6/2013
My heart kind of fell when he said, "Tell me how to fix this?"
You are honestly great at what and how you write.
| O.O chapter 2 . 10/6/2013
"You wear the clothes of your childhood life and the face of your hardened adulthood, prepared to see the man who left you somewhere in between."
That, right there, is powerful. I love your writing. And strangely, second person works very well. You have an undeniable talent.
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/6/2013
Thank u so much ur story is amazing and my heart was like a drum when I was reading it ..
| Hr'awkryn chapter 12 . 12/22/2012
Wow, so amazing! I absolutely loved this. You captured all the emotion perfectly, and I was completely caught up in the story from the start.
| CouslandSpitFire chapter 12 . 11/26/2012
I just read your story in one go-through. Your writing style is really, really good to read - it creates atmosphere and makes me imagine the scenes so well! And the feelings you put into it... :) Absolutely perfect, the tiniest words fit (like "warmer than the sun", it's so true!).
I'm happy you wrote this, a little turn-around of the whole event that can happen in-game. And I think it's really accurate - because, honestly, Alistair would never have taken another queen. Ever. And they deserve happiness. And Cheese.
Really, really awesome! :)
| dorko525 chapter 12 . 5/20/2012
This is definitely my top favorite dragon age fic ever. You have a way with words that linger in my mind even months after reading it for the first time. I just know I'll be reading this again in the future.
| dorko525 chapter 11 . 5/20/2012
Yes! The matter of Morrigan is laid to rest. That was such a horrible moment for me in game. The very first time I did it, I gaped at the screen and considered sacrificing myself but then that meant anyone could put their grubby hands on Alistair. The tenderness in this scene is lovely. Also the way you write Alistair throughout this is very in character. So adorably persistent.
| dorko525 chapter 10 . 5/20/2012
Oh Alistair you were just made for her.
| dorko525 chapter 9 . 5/20/2012
This would have been a welcome scene in my game with one of my Wardens. I adore this
| dorko525 chapter 8 . 5/20/2012
It just makes me shiver when Alistair gets all intense. This was such a great chapter
| dorko525 chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
"He was staring at you like you were the moon and stars and sun all at once. As though everything in his world only made sense when arranged around you."
This made me tear up and my eyes have yet to clear.
| dorko525 chapter 6 . 5/20/2012
Even after reading this twice. This chapter still destroys me. The whole story does.
| dorko525 chapter 5 . 5/20/2012
You have a way of writing love scenes! I can practically feel the emotion
| dorko525 chapter 4 . 5/20/2012
So delightlfully conflicted.