Reviews for Merry XXXmas
Etemenanki chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Perfect ending. Just PERFECT. I nearly died laughing! And well ... the rest was really hot. And believable which is not easy with Hunter and Bret.
takers dark lover chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Oh this is just wild I loved it. Great story.
Fauxhawk chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
LOL

Damn, Shawn has them both wrapped around his little finger.

Nice to see the almighty Bret get taken a peg, even if Hunter had to, you know, sacrifice a peg of his own, if you will XD

Awesomeness :D
shinigami sakura2000 chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
OMG! That was seriously awesome. You did great! If those two were ever to get together that's one of the few ways I could really see it happening. After reading yours I'm inspired to write one of my own. Loved the ending! I'm still laughing while I'm typing this. I just wanted to say again you did great!
SaraHHH chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
I didn't think I would like this pairing at all however I really enjoyed this fic it was really awesome, also I had to laugh at the end when they found out Shawn wasn't serious lol.
redsandman99 chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Good grief. Shawn's got both Hunter and Bret whipped if they were willing to do that just for him. I love it.
XxShawns Guardian AngelxX chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
And all that silly little blonde would have to do is pout and cry to Bret or *look* at Hunter. *shake head*

I am so glad I stayed up to read this. Its 4:05 am, I'm sleep as hell but this fic was so freaking good! Oh man...I can't even...

I could just see it in my head I freaking love you wf4! The two of them...on the bed...glaring at one another...Bwahahahaha

*side-splitting laughter*

*breathes*

Oh man...I so knew you could do it! I freaking love Christmas right now!

*snickers...giggles...snorts...*

My parents are gonna kill me but I cant stop laughing it was so good. Man...Owen tripped me out and so did Kevin! Bwahahaha

Okay. Im going to bed now...Funny as hell! You get a giant cookie!
HardyxGirlx89 chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Their struggle for dominance was great - and the use of hte belt was brilliant ) I think you did a great job with the characters - I laughed out loud when Bret did the whole 'Best there is' bit.

...and it was a joke. hehe - poor guys, they just love Shawn so much.
Esha Napoleon chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Quote the Hitman nevermore XP

LOVE IT!
Dark Kaneanite chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
LMAO. Wow! Just, woow. And Shawn wasn't even serious about it. I would have killed him.

But I have to admit, that was some hot, and I mean HOT action between those two. I love seeing to Doms fight for the right to top. *pants*

This fic was full of awesome and I LOVED IT!
HeartbreakDX chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Epic wins is all i can say.
slashburd chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Now that was festively fantastic. I love the fact that Shawn was joking, it seems like something he would really say just to see if they'd do it.

I loved the fact that Hunter got his own back too- I was so desperately hoping that he would. Great story and straight into my faves :)
Thorsmaven chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Bwhahahahahahah Oh my zeus, I don't think I've laughed that hard in quite some time- the dialogue, their characters, and the very end just killed me! That was excellent, thank you so much. I enjoyed every minute of it! They're both such pills, it was so so good :D
GrandpasGuitars chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
That was great. I laughed my ass off; it was definitely worth the read, and thinking about how it was all a joke and they actually did it... And it was believeable at the same time... I loved it. I'm sure Thorsmaven will love it.

Bret through Shawn in the trash... ah well. Both those big men know that they'll give Shawn gifts again. They just can't deny those pretty blue eyes.

(PS- Out of the two of them, I think Bret would make the better bitch. A lot more whining comes from the Hitman than the Game ;)