|Reviews for Smile and Nod|
| becksterRES chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
I love it! Before reading this, I hadn't realized how messed up Kairi's year would've been. *sigh* poor girl. I guess this trio really has gone through a lot. Great story!
Until next time Peace.
| Ghost Writer no. 3 chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
I LOVE IT BECAUSE IT'S SO HONEST!
| manyissues101 chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
This was wonderful. I love it when Kairi's portrayed as more than a helpless sissy. And the year Sora was asleep has always captivated me.
| Cheerio-panda45 chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Wow. This is the side of Kairi that you know is there, but you never really see. You brought it out beautifully. My fav line - 'She hates them today because its the only way she'll be able to love them tomorrow.' There was so much power in that one line, and it was the perfect way to end the story. Kudos
| Of Naught chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Nice story! You really know how to get inside some one's head and show their emotions and thoughts.
I have a suggestion: Make a story like this, but in Riku's or Sora's PoV.
Keep up the great work!
| Paosheep chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
I really liked this. I can't find the words exactly to explain in specifics, but... yeah, it's like I get it. Thanks for writing something good.
| Shire Folk chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
I saw that pic too. I gushed when I saw Kairi in the same cinematic cutscene as Aqua and Mickey. Plus Greek-i-fied Zack.
Yeah, this one was dark and angsty, but if that was Kairi's year she sure as well had to have been harbouring some measure of spite towards her two best friends for indirectly putting her through it.
Four days from finals? I've already gone through two of five. One's on Saturday too, which really sucks.
May the Grace of the Valar Protect You
| kikofreako chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Zack Fair is also going to be in BBS. :D I think I just died and went to heaven.
So wonderful. Your second-to-last paragraph was just GOLD. I'm inspired to write angsty Kairi now. People who label her 'annoying' never stop to think that the real battles aren't won on the field. Look at people like Cloud Strife, like Leon, like Auron. They're strong, sure, but their psyches? Not so much. And that's what matters.
I loved the idea of Kairi's date (in a 'good plot' way, not in a 'let's rape Kairi!' way XD). What would happen when Sora discovered it? What would happen when Riku did?
This story spawns plot bunnies like Don Imus spawns flamers. In a good way. I loved it.
| darth-korbo chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Plenty of angst, yes... but very well written! I can't wait for Birth by Sleep, either. Thanks for the post; good luck on finals.
| caitlinkeitorin chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
:) i like it
| Jupiter-Lightning chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
I actually feel sorry for Kairi in this. Poor girl missing out on all of the adventures. Maybe she'll have some adventures in BbS? Too bad she won't remember them. XD
Yuck... college finals. I finished mine today thank the lord. Good luck on them! :)
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
| the fountain of dreams chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Yeah, this is an angsty one. A little short too. But you portrayed how Kairi felt during the last year pretty well. Especially the part where people thought she was crazy when she talked about Sora. o_o
Anyways, good job! Good luck with your finals!