|Reviews for Win Some, Lose Some|
| Lady FoxFire chapter 12 . 9/24
I LOVE the omake of Naruto vs Neji! It was F-ing perfect!
| I'm. . .An Innocent Bystander chapter 22 . 9/19
I would love to see a continuation of this! By the way, feeling incredibly vindicated with Naruto's reaction to the Chidori... Pretty much my exact thoughts anytime I read Kakashi's/Gai's explanation/introduction for the Chidori. Just with a lot less vulgarity...
| ShadeDurza chapter 2 . 7/21
Okay I don't get something. Why would Naruto say that he would make the male star of Kakashi's porn book green with envy? I get next bit-the sympathy pains-but not the envy part. I'm probably going to kick myself when you explain it though, but for the sake of clearing it all up can you explain it to me please?
| Infernal Maelstrom chapter 23 . 7/7
I would just like to point out a recurring mistake throughout all the stories you have posted in this fic.
A Youkai is a demon. I.e; Kyuubi is a Youkai.
Youki, without the a, is the energy that demons use. I.e; Kyuubi's chakra.
You can have been constantly using Youkai instead of Youki in the fic.
It can be easily mistaken but for those who actually know the difference between the two, reading can be jarring when for example Kyuubi uses his 'Youkai' to do things. (Kyuubi using his demon to do things? What?)
| Greysh chapter 11 . 7/6
hihi :) brilliant! I love smart naruto. the banter with anko is great too.
| Greysh chapter 7 . 7/6
lovely chapter. I really liked how you wrote kiba as a very determined ninja. ninja don't cheat :)
Very sad too for him. I hope that naruto will realize how great a friend kiba is. He loved hinata enough to let her go.
you don't often see a smart kiba. It was a nice change.
| SeerKing chapter 2 . 7/1
Do this story!
| sanabalis chapter 20 . 6/30
Sweet, bitter, powerful and happy at the same time! I like it! Cheering for Naru/Hina in this one!
| sanabalis chapter 15 . 6/29
OMG! This is an amazing piece of fanfic! Incredible! Astounding! Heck, I have no words for it! One of the best I've ever read! Oh how much I want more of this!
| sanabalis chapter 6 . 6/29
Sweet! True finale! :) I figured he was making concrete right away, and it was awesome! Siege weapons? Hell, yeah! Plus, he can use storage scrolls to take them on missions! Like, to the land of Snow. Just imagine when Doto reveals his siege train, Naruto reveals some of HIS weapons. And AAA guns against the blimp! :P
| sanabalis chapter 5 . 6/29
Of course we want it! But maybe you already did! Let's check the next chapter(s)!
| sanabalis chapter 4 . 6/29
Awesome! Pure gold!
| sanabalis chapter 3 . 6/29
| sanabalis chapter 2 . 6/29
I'd definitely like to read more of this!
| Greylle chapter 22 . 5/22
This was quite amusing, though my lack of familiarity with the Warhammer 40k setting did have me googling a few things to try and figure it all out as i was going along. In keeping with that, you might as well have just gone ahead and dropped names in the story so those NOT familiar with the setting could have more easily pictured things.