Reviews for Inside You
SnowRider14 chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
HAHAHAHA! YESSSSS! I loved this! Mac ever impatient? First for everyone they say!
smut1956 chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Sexy, steamy and erotic. I love Mac enjoying the show while still adjusting to domestic bliss. Such fun, I'm impressed that you are listening to Greek music. That's dedication.

Thanks for sharing.

AllyCuddles chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
I loved this. I listened to the song actually listening to it now I translated the lyrics and I can actually sing it after listening to it after 5 times. I'm pretty good at talking in a different lang. I could actually totally see this happening. Very very very fanfic. and that's nice that you did this for your friend. I would too:P and stella dancing to this I love that:P
AssassinsQueen chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
It's a nice little story... and once again I'm sad that I can't read and understand greek :(

it's a language which I would like to learn... but okay...

Good job :)
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Incredible story! I really enjoyed it! Very cute! They are adorable together!
csi-ncis chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
haha that was great, the end was awesome :)
lily moonlight chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Fantastic! I liked this a lot :) I can well imagine Mac taking the chance to indulge himself a little :D I love the image of him standing there admiring Stella, and not quite believing that they are sharing an apartment either. Nice ending too :D
rocksmacked chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
That's nice story! :) oh, really Mac really enjoy and watching Stella's dancing! :) This must be sexy dance and maybe like tango? hahahaha.. LOL!
MARNIC chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
I might sound stupid, but why would these lyrics reminds us of boats and popcorn? I am Greek so... Am i missing a joke? Thanks for the fanfic btw! /watch?viQ8FObtqcqY
DNAisUnique chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Back-to-back Grillows and SMacked? I'm in fic heaven. :D

Love the opening line!

-thud- Love him watching her dance/cook/listen to music.

Epic about this, everything is! Eep!

-thud- Now I have to hear this song...

You are forever epic.
Synnove chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
-pretends to sing-

Μesa sou mίa stigmi an zoύsa

Τίpota άllo den tha soy zētoύsa

Τίpota άllo den tha lachtaroύsa

Μesa sou mίa stigmi na zoύsa

WHEE. God I love you for writing this. So fast, too. I adore this, you know it. Maybe someday we'll be lucky enough to watch Mac sail a boat on Stella's salty popcorn.

Ha. That still sounds so wrong. Or so right. Haven't decided.

I love Mac learning the title of the song and pulling her immediately away from making noms.

That sounded dirty too.

Maybe because they're leaving noms to have other kinds of noms...

I just made it worse, didn't I?


Love you, Jules. Thanks for this.
csimesser1 chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
that was good loved it