|Reviews for Smokescreen|
| Carling chapter 1 . 2/20
I can't recall if I've read and reviewed this before. It feels new to me. I loved this sweeter, more innocent version of their love, especially after reading the darker Defiled. Hermione oddly stole the show for a bit with her charming of Crabbe and Goyle.
I'm almost sorry the story ended here. I liked this version of them so much I wish I could spend more time in their world with them.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
This was really good :) can't wai tot read more of your fics
| Lady Ambika chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Oh my feels, I could feel the characters, this is amazing!
| FARISWHEEL chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
| PiNKCooKieS chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
This was very good :D I liked it a lot, and I love the ending.
| YeCatsJ chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Great one shot Love the happy ending
| The-little-67-impala chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
CONYInUE ASAP!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!NOWNOWNOW!NOW!Puh!LEASE!PWEEZ!ILY!SO!PWEEZ!PWEEZ!PWEEZ!KEEP!IT!UP!WITH!YOUR!WRITING!JUST KEEP WRITNG THIS IS REALLY GOOD!
| SamHAS chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
This was cool...
| bookworm19065 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
This is an excellent one-shot as well! I love it!
| thrnbrooke chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Glad it worked out!
| Rooz990 chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
| welshteacup chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
I died and went to heaven. Thanks for killing me you amazing author p
| Reader chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
good story and i loved the end. though i can't however picture myself particularily enjoying someone licking my glasses... a strange sentiment i must say
| abbylabby chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
I love, love, love this story (too much? sorry )
favourite part: Crabbe and Goyle being gentlemen :D
you are a brilliant writer.
The only thing that I'm not quite sure about when it comes to your stories is that you refer to Harry as brunette, isn't he black-haired?
But I love your stories anyway. Sorry to hear you are so stressed with University and everything though, hope you'll be fine.
All the best and lots of love to you.
| LeVaire chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Hello fellow Singaporean! That fanfic was really cute! I used to read a lot of DMHG in the past, but now I find DMHP undeniably adorable! Btw, you mentioned that you're a freshmen in university, you wouldn't happen to be in NUS, would you? :D