|Reviews for Rebirth|
| rozzy07 chapter 6 . 2/9/2010
And so the battle intensifies for Sam's baby. And what prices are being paid. Not least Kitsune, who is in the hands of something utterly evil, and it makes you wonder at the damage being done here. And how Sam will react!
| rozzy07 chapter 5 . 2/9/2010
Wow. Simply put Sifi - wow what a great chapter with Sam literally spinning the wheel between realms, between them and a gaggle of screaming demons, and getting his brother to safety with the final spin. It was a great way to show him manning up to his place in the scheme of things and learning to use his powers in such a stunning way. Loved it. But then again I am such a Sammy-girl who has been left grinning silly. But on the down side me no likey that bad demonic devil tracking after Sam's little boy...
| rozzy07 chapter 4 . 2/4/2010
Hmm Dean channelling Enki's superGod powers is doing him no good at all physically wise. And Castiel, well as much I would like to slap him into oblivion in S4/S5 with a cold wet flannel, he does tries to do right here with Sam's boy - only then proves to be no help at all! So Dean steps up to the mark with his SuperGod powers to do right by his nephew/grandchild! and seemingly pays a price. Gah, talk about making my mouth dry and palms sweaty here, my old friend!
| rozzy07 chapter 3 . 2/4/2010
Gulp Sifi, cold shower warning should have been a precursor to this chapter with them boys and their girls getting to know each other again in the biblical sense! And yep Sammy, smart, way too smart, lets Dean know that his boy is alive and is wholly in agreement with it. Now I guess this chapter is just the kinky quiet interlude before further mayhem occurs - no?
| rozzy07 chapter 2 . 2/4/2010
Giddy tipsy dance of JOY as you bring Laura back into the fold. Dean's reaction to seeing his truest love again pure bliss. And yet still things hurt here for the boys, Sam guessing but not yet voicing that his son is still alive. Alive despite Dean's assertation that he done his worst, and despite that and all the ramifications that go with it, it still leaves you with a sense of hope. Hope in itself running a tight thread throughout this chapter. So sorry for my late input... but loved it nonetheless.
| rozzy07 chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Lordy my dear friend how late am I in my review here - life took me over but all I can confess as I read this opening chapter is my joy that Laura is back and MustardSeed is in the thick of it in helping Dean save Sam's baby boy and yep it is so heart delicious.
Sam, ah my dear sweet hotty, and whatever deity you might want to call upon, it is in deed my wish here that you get some insight to how much you are loved and how ro keep our prayers open that this migrates to your new born son. Dean's own words here have to give you that hope: “We make our own future Sam. There’s nothing that’s written in stone…”
So Sifi, sorry as ever for my retardness when it comes to responding to your delicious works. Roz
| Maz101 chapter 8 . 1/15/2010
Well, of course - you can't kid a kidder! Loved how they were way ahead in the plot and how slickly they captured Gabriel.
You had some great visual images in this.
Loved..."...clinging to the veil by one hand as the body that looked like Kitsune, while in mid flight shifted, melted and warped until their old acquaintance resumed his disguise." I can see a very cinematic heroic stance here!
And later, the scene where they all clasp each other (I wrote 'hug' there first to describe it but it seemed too fluffy and & I'm not a huge fan of fluffy - but I did enjoy the moment!). It gave a real impression of unity and strength. And love.
Your embelishment of canon (d'you know - I'd never used that term, ever, until I began reading ff - weird!) is very cleverly done. Seamless. Bravo!
LOVED Sam's ticking off of the deadly sins and just how the angles are as guilty as anyone. It was perfect. I predict here and now that there will be a similar conversation sometime in the remaining episodes of this season. It's such a good device to highlight the flip side of so-called good and justify whatever the Winchesters have to do.
And the bleeding through of Enki et al? Well, Laura/Ina seems to be coping pretty well so I'm not too worried, and the ability to bring life is always going to be handy with their lifestyle.
I saved the best (well, what I thought was the best...) for last ...Lovedlovedlovedloved..."his whispered admission was a thunderclap in the otherwise silent room, “I’m afraid.”
She shook her head stroking his hair and face and pressed her mouth to his, “Who am I?”
“Laura.” he kissed her again, “Ina.” And again, “Love.” And one more time, “Mine.”
Er... could that be considered fluffy? No, I think the strength of it defies the fluffy tag. Anyway, I thought it was lovely!
So, the end of another story. Always a shame but actually, with you, it's always a stepping off point for the next one so, Thank You, and I'm already anxious to see what will follow. Congrats!
| TraSan chapter 7 . 1/14/2010
Wow, I have to say Kitsune's torture was so hard to read. Well done, sifi!
I love that the boys are facing this head on - going for the win. Reluctant, perhaps, but facing it.
Sorry! I missed giving you feedback when my computer died for several days.
Awesome - always.
| Nvrmore chapter 8 . 1/13/2010
Ha ha ha. That's my boy. :D *claps*
O. Sam knew too. Good boy. Way to go with that 'method acting'. hee hee.
Love your summing up of the 7 deadly sins! That's awesome!
O. No door. They really are becoming less human. Again I say, interesting.
Yea for Cas!
Well, at least the boys will be keeping step with their women in who they are.
As always, nicely done. Sorry it took so long to get to it. You have a wonderful way with suspense. And really, this story, over all, was much more... happy and hopeful than some of your past ones. And I like it. Kudos.
| Nvrmore chapter 7 . 1/13/2010
Another wonderfully intense chapter.
I am so hoping Dean knows what's going on. I think he does or he wouldn't be so adamant about Sam leaving... but... you never know. :D
Off to 8.
| Nvrmore chapter 6 . 1/13/2010
Oo. So how did Sam know where she was? :D
M... so many threads. It's what you're good at, though. No? :)
Funny how everyone know what the boys are destined for (and their progeny, apparently), except the boys.
Ha. Interesting last thoughts. I wonder how chocolate will become significant (as I know it will).
| Nana56 chapter 8 . 1/13/2010
They already are living, breathing gods. *sigh*
Very, very, very, VERY good chapter! Nice way to leave the fic, too, btw. lol
The baby's safe and presumably back in Tibet or wherever. Cool.
That clod was the beginning of life or something? It's growing vegetation. maybe he should throw it out into space and grow a new planet or something. Weird.
This has been an awesome fic, my dear. Hope there's another one coming. :D
*Huggles you tight* Love you. :)
| SamDeanLover28 chapter 8 . 1/13/2010
| sunnyjunedays chapter 8 . 1/13/2010
Hi, Oh wow, i really loved this chapter, (not that i don't love them all) but this one had me practically leaping from my seat and cheering when Sam was dealing with the Trickser/Gabriel and the Laura appeared and then Dean, great stuff.
It was great to see Dean and Sam working together in verbally battering Trickster/Gabriel whilst he was held prisoner in the ring of fire, lets hope it never rains because at least then the boys will always know where he is. Good points about the angels and what they want and a great pointer in that none of the angels ever told about Lillith being the final seal.
Really loved these lines also:
“M lust… I love Lust…” Dean smiled dreamily.
The captive angel rolled his eyes. Sam smiled and flushed with affection for the simplicity of his big brothers’ base nature.
Back in the motel room and what Dean 'yakked up.' hmm.
Love Dean still there to reassure his brother that everything will be okay, even after all they've been through he still wants to make things okay for Sam and i have no doubt that he'll move any obstacle no matter how big to make sure the baby is okay.
Great chapter which i could rave on and on about but i don't think there's enough space and i have to get to work.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Take care. x
| TraSan chapter 8 . 1/12/2010
Whoa, girl, and I thought Kripke wrote big story lines! :)
Interesting, where you've headed with this chapter.
Did Sam full on Jedi mind-trick Gabriel?
They can both move the Veil now with hardly a thought and Dean did create life from puking up dirt?
Wow. Okay, I'm definitely intrigued. More please.