i like it..

nice idea!

but what does TBC mean?

(cackles) Oh, yes! Destroy the evil...(is grinning like one who is mad before looking aroud shiftly) Oh...(clears throat) Right.

Musn't do that.

Anyway, must say that was lovely and I enjoyed it greatly.

Brillant!

Please continue when you can?

Man I love this story... All I can say.

I'm really enjoying this story. I love the way you write things from Hatter's point of view and it sounds a lot like him. Very well done. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Interesting... More?

I love the description when Jack comes. It was perfect, exactly what I thought he was going through in that scene. Love it!

Good chapter! Update soon!

Yeah! Another great one. Poor Hatter. :D

OMG, I really love this! You've totally captured Hatter's character. I hope you write more. :D

I'm loving this, and I love how you continued the emotionsdrug metaphor scifi (i refuse to refer to it by the new logo) was going for. Keep up the great work (I haven't noticed any grammatical or spelling mistakes either) )

Really good. I loved it. I honestly can't wait for more and hope to see it soon.

I love the last two lines! Again, I really do like the way you voice Hatter here! Very nicely done!

I just got around to watching the mini-series that I had dvr'd. It was wonderful! This is a very interesting beginning and I really like your take on Hatter! I look forward to reading more.

"Hatter had his own brand of self-confidence and self-assurance that meant never having to say ‘yes sir’ to anybody."

Yep, that just about sums him up! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hm. VERY well written. Please keep going?