Reviews for Memento Mori
Jess chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
I'm totally not a Will/Kate fan but your fic was great. You made their relationship believable in a they're are all they have left and that invites its own sort of closeness kind of way. Nicely done!
Di-Bee chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
I'm, litterally, on the edge of tears! Okay, I've seen a torchwood episode right before now with two major characters death and being pretty depressed and all, but that fiction made my heart sunk, even deeper. And made me want to watch that episode (Pavor Nocturnus) again, even though I've always found it the saddest and the hardest to watch of all, even before eulogy, or haunted for that matter. But really, really this story is amazingly written, and its meaning had really gotten to me. I wanted to congratulate you for it, because it really is worth the reading!

It's Shykeiro who had advised me to have a look at your stories since you're one of the rarest english writing author she reads (now I sure get why), and I'm going to thank her much for that, because this single story was so worth it! Thanks for writing it (though I think it must have been hard for you to write, since that kind of story always tend to get to the people who write them more sometimes than the people who read them.

But in a word : the ship is... I've always found it weird, even watching the episode, but it suddenly all clicks into place after watching this, and the particicular relationship with both John and MAgnus that Will have here is really really... something! (Okay, that was way more than just one word, but couldn't help it but tell what I was feeling on this one,n since it really had gotten to me.)

SOmehow, it makes me apprehend the episode differently. Really will have to rewatch it sometimes soon.

But to get back to that : awesome job you did! Now I4ll stop, my hands are shaking)

But, again, really, really great piece of writing you did here!
Surreal Squirrel chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Kate and Will. Huh. Cute. Well - written. Good job!
Ivy3 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
I actually didn't see the episode yet, but I did read about it. Wow, never thought I'd see (well, read) John and Will as friends. It was weird in a very pleasant way, even with Magnus always being there between them. I loved that John gave him the locket and Will wanted Magnus Jr. to have it. In this context, Kate and Will makes sense and I love that she's still her snarky b!tch self. *g* Poor Magnus being nicknamed Maggie *hugs baby Magnus*. And Marco is awesome in his few lines (I don't know if he's an original character or from the episode, but he's still awesome)-

"“Dunno, Will. Might have an impact on them to find out even Kate Freelander respects your rank.”"

"“Maybe when your wife isn’t watching.”"
TheNaggingCube chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
You made me laugh, made me cry, made me love Kate and Will

*snicker* Dork! *giant belly laugh* Sith!

*sob* Druitt, the locket, ...

Well done.
LunaSolTierra chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Amazing fic I couldn't stop thinking about what Will said about him and Kate having a son, implying a future relationship between them on the real world of Sanctuary. Now reading this fic, you've turn me into a complete shipper of this pairing. The interaction between the characters is awesome and very believable. It's amazing that amongst all the bad some good things have come from and Will are amazing love their relationship and little Magnus. Congratulation on writing such a great fic, hope you write more Will/Kate fics.
melissaadams22 chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Hey there,

Well it's not my oilrig fic but Nice enough. :-D This wasn't my favorite episode of the season but it left a lot of 'holes' open for fiction, I'm surprised there isn't more.

This is a GREAT job, truly great though I have to ask myself what woudl Magnus have done if she hadn't died in that explosion and the world really was like that? hm...plot bunny for a future fic. LOL

talkofcake chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
You know I love this. I know it has to be a great story if it made me enjoy a pairing that, initially, my response was a little bit of bile in the back of the throat. ;) So good job. You've really helped me accept the Will/Kate pairing because it DOES make sense; they were all they had left. Very beautiful and tragic once you get past the initial shock and "OMGWTF". :)

Beautiful, sad fic. I'm glad I was able to help with this piece!
Kam chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
oh, wonderful, love. Sad and sweet and so in character. You did good. *hug*
Shykeiro chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Sith Apprentice mwahahaha.

I've cried...o0. It's really surprising me. I'm reading and suddenly, I feel something weird on my cheek. "What the hell of that?" Maybe I'm tired... Ahah, more seriously it took me times to get that we were in the vision of Magnus before she appears in this ruined world. But maybe i've just not understood the note and the spoilers xD

And the reading of this sotry was pleasant. A little bit sad, but cute and sweet.

Like always, I liked it.

Thanks for and keep working as well as you always do :)
Divinia Serit chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
He. I love it when you write stories. And once again, I'm not a Will/Kate person, but you did a brilliant job with this one. It flowed nicely and everything just worked so well together!

[It was kind of like having a father again. In a weird ‘join me, my child, and together we shall overthrow the Emperor and rule the galaxy’ way.”]

I loved that line! And I really, really liked the beginning with Will and Druitt. It was so powerful and you did a fabulous job writing it! Wonderful story!