|Reviews for No Air|
| jill chapter 24 . 8/23/2014
I loved this! I noticed a few mistakes in your grammar, but now many. The story was truly breathtaking!
| Hannah chapter 13 . 3/7/2012
I looked ahead and it seems you haven't gotten chucked into a dumpster yet, so I shall take the honor.
(drags over recycling bin) *pant pant wheeze wheeze* Okay! I didn't quite get a dumpster, but here's a recycling bin! In you go! Hey! No escaping! Get back here!
Oh, and I like this plot thingy. Probably because I don't have to wait for an update.
| Different Child chapter 24 . 11/6/2011
All I can say is epic and amazing. I really read this a bit ago but I meant to review sooner but I wanted it to be awesome...and this is what I come up with.
| Hannah chapter 24 . 10/22/2011
Apparently, when it comes to the Abrams, blue eyes are a dominant gene.
| Han ah chapter 19 . 10/22/2011
My Korea experiences aren't as good. It mainly includes a lot of smog and summer heat and rainy season.
| Hannah chapter 14 . 10/22/2011
I am from the Bread Bucket in good ole, nosy USA. I might have said this already… meh.
| Hannah chapter 11 . 10/21/2011
My Korean genes were washed out by, uh, Korean genes. Heh heh.
| Hannah chapter 19 . 9/22/2011
Um… was that an expression? 'Cuz everywhere in Korea I've been has apartments and no grass. Well, grass, but no houses.
| fightingthestormxx chapter 4 . 9/4/2011
the last sentence just broke my heart
but in a good way :)
| Amelia St.Claire chapter 24 . 4/24/2011
This story is fantastic! I couldn't put it down. Please continue to write more Tarties like this!
| Falling.into.the.sky chapter 24 . 3/28/2011
I love this story so much! When Artie went into cardiac arrest, I was like, if she kills Artie, hell will rain down on her. But then I figured you were too smart to kill him off, because if you did, I wouldn't be the only one to give you hell for it. And then he survived, and now they have Kevin. I love this story.
| Elsiebelse chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Awwww... the first fanfic I ever read!
| Hatter of Madness chapter 17 . 10/3/2010
About freaking time.
I'm so sad because after this there are only six chapters left, and, also, I've realized I just wasted a weekend reading this. I don't really mind though (that's a lie...I'm so going to fall behind because I didn't do my geometry and Spanish homework). This is a really nice story, too. Unfortunately, because of the afore mentioned homework, I'm going to storymark this and come back to it possibly tomorrow.
Happy October 3rd.
| Hatter of Madness chapter 16 . 10/3/2010
I guess I won't need this sledgehammer anymore...
Thank God, I was beginning to worry. The stuff between Tina and Ben was really nice, I can't believe he faked a broken leg. I can't really see anyone who resembles Artie a little doing that.
I can't think of anything else to say, so I'm just going to leave it at that. Sorry this review is so short.
| Hatter of Madness chapter 15 . 10/3/2010
I think this is the first time I've laughed in a couple of chapters (Brittany telling Tina her hair is "colorful"). I'm kind of hoping now he wakes up before I have to give you a impromptu (still using my favorite word...) patriotic wedgie, too.
I don't really have anything else to say except that two of my aunts and uncles and three of my cousins live in Utah...doubt you know them, though...