Reviews for Apology
riptocs chapter 2 . 9/13/2012
lol it was great and cute how Sasori tried to get him riled up again at the end
Wolven-1 chapter 2 . 5/9/2011
I love it. i want it. i claim it. it is mine now!
FaintReality chapter 2 . 8/21/2010
Oh yeah

if I was a man, I'd be so gay after I'd read this...

Im going straight for Drug now.

It's too good to stop.
FaintReality chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
ohmygod

I almost wanted to kill you at the end of this.

I was so "yeah yeah.. yes, yaoi" and then "WHAT? NO YAOI?"

Meanie.

But since there are more chapters...

phew :D
DeeaE chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
love the storyy
Rinata Kuiichi chapter 2 . 4/10/2010
I so friggin hate you for writing this. It's so bloody amazing! Man, If i was this good... lol thanks for writing, cant wait to read the sequal
deidara-kupkake chapter 2 . 4/3/2010
*dies from nosebleed* uke sasori seme dirty talking deidara SMEXY STORY!
CharleighAnarchy chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
Well, its a great story. I just have one issue.

The tenses.

They changed quite often.

Writing in present tense is nearly impossible without putting pass tense, so next time try writing in pass tense.

Other than that, nice.
ImaduckQuaQua chapter 2 . 12/14/2009
that was interesting. very nice though, awsome chapter
MagdalenaCS chapter 2 . 12/12/2009
OMG!

this is the best and long lemon!

I am really impresionate!

kisses and excuse me because I don't speak english

bye!
black55widow chapter 2 . 12/12/2009
Nice long descriptive sex.
Selyann chapter 2 . 12/12/2009
Tak, tak jest bardzo dobrze... /

Ułaa, no słów mi brak... Haha. Kolejny raz utwierdzonam się w przekonaniu, że wolę, jak Deidara jest stroną dominującą. c:

Bardzo, bardzo przyzwoicie napisane. Nawet jeśli nie było aż tak perwersyjnie, to i tak wyszło naprawdę fantastycznie, a o to przecież chodzi.

Normalnie aż pójdę dalej pracować nad drugim rozdziałem "Genuine Gaiety?". :P
MagdalenaCS chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
please!

continue this!

wa you are so evil ;o;

but I love this fic!1

lemon lemon lemon!

and sasori uke rulz!

kisses from Chile

bye
Selyann chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
M-Meanie!

Ja chcę więcej. :c Zapowiada się bardzo obiecująco. W sumie to myślałam, że to one-shot będzie, więc jeszcze bardziej byłam zaszokowana tym, że tak nagle urwałaś. D: To zakrawa na okrucieństwo! :c