Reviews for NARC
queenofgoblins chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Ohh I really enjoyed this. Angsty [
georgesgurl117 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Great story...really well written. Good job!
anne-writes chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
totally great. a bit too flowery for me, especially at the beginning, but the last half made up for it.
Cosmyk Angel chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
I like this story. Very Snape angsty. Are you going to write a chapter where he goes to find her?

Cosmyk
LoveHGSS chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Typically I tell someone how 'awesome' or 'amazing' their story is, but I can't bring myself to put this story that low. This was sheer beauty. I have never, NEVER, been as entranced by a story as this one. Don't ask me why, I have no idea. This was absolutely beautiful and I think that you should write more to it. I feel like a silly fangirl with nothing better do it, but I really found myself engrossed with this story more than any other, and I have read A LOT of stories. I am begging for just one more chapter! That's all I ask. :D
WAYAMY27NARF chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
Ok, so I just finished reading a very poorly written story, which promptly left a horrible taste in my mouth.

Then I read your story. Everything that was wrong about the other story was absolutely friggin' right in this one.

Great all around. I love your writing style and the way you handled the characters. I will definitely put you on author alert.

BEAUTIFUL!

WAYAMY27NARF
bournespeed chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
I liked that, liked that alot :o)

Any chance of your expanding on it now those two years have past?
KGSoprano chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Absolutely beautiful. Your writing is positively exquisite. However, I can't help but feel like at some moments, Severus is out of character. Every once in a while, I feel like his actions remind me strongly of another cannon character (though which I cannot even begin to fathom). Nonetheless, you could have written this for nameless, faceless, original characters, and it would have virtually no impact on the talent of your writing. I'll keep a lookout for your work!