|Reviews for Star Fox: Survival on a Frozen Hell|
| A human being chapter 5 . 12/27/2016
I believe I know what started the war. A rogue Cornerian faction, the Venomians. The war would weaken both sides, and the Venomians could destroy the remaining side.
| Tundra of Hell chapter 8 . 9/26/2015
should since-should, since
| Tundra of Hell chapter 7 . 9/26/2015
a sick feelings-a sick feeling
says softly just to antagonize you Fuck You."-says 'Fuck You', just softly enough to antagonize you."
| Tundra of Hell chapter 6 . 9/26/2015
You're kind-Your kind
she could-she couldn't
| Tundra of Hell chapter 5 . 9/26/2015
Arcadia things-Arcadia, things
| Tundra of Hell chapter 3 . 9/26/2015
doing she asked-doing?" she asked,
you planets-your planets
| Tundra of Hell chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
seventy fiver-seventy five
| A human being chapter 5 . 5/30/2015
I know who started the war. It was Andross he attacked the Cornerian deep space fleets and attacked Arcadia. How did Andross plan it out so well?
-A (random human being
| DodgeThis chapter 34 . 10/27/2014
Sad ending to a wonderful story. During the "evil" krystal moments, i had reformed the small scene as if raye was far more willing/patient to work with her in her anger and accept it so she might have pity on him by allowing her to see into the life he lived though his memories on the hell wasteland.
Being able to set aside differences and realize the similarities and even mentioning the fact there was a good chance the venomians/andross and started the war to pit the two factions against each other.
Still the story was good in its own way of course, its just a slightly darker/dramatic version of what could be in some cases, which many people enjoy. Guess I'm just one of the few that gets more out of mainly heart warming scenario's.
You definitely have a knack for making people cry lol and most everything was well detailed/articulated with very few mistakes. Great work, sure the sequel will be just a good.
| DodgeThis chapter 33 . 10/27/2014
It was so difficult trying to read through the first quarter of the chapter, but could have been worse so thankful it only got so far. Had actually took to reading comments at one point during the scene since my heart couldn't accept him betraying miyu.
Anyway, krystal is pissed and had heard what happens next(at least its not permanent), so wont have a heart attack and go cold turkey on this story's sequel thankfully. Guess I'm emotionally sensitive so when a good natured character I've gotten attached to gets betrayed(almost) or the other one "supposedly" dies, I sort of go temporarily morbid with depression. Such a good story overall and well written must say though. Cant find any other aspect i have issues with so great work.
| DodgeThis chapter 32 . 10/27/2014
Oh God why! That relationship that held my heart so close to this story! If he really falls I am Game Over... dont think i can handle it...
| DodgeThis chapter 29 . 10/26/2014
What a crazy insane beginning, thankful it was a nightmare but lol'd towards the end for sure. Everything after was great stuff, 'cept miyu beat the ship out of him for lying which i cant blame him for lying, especially about the her death or deformed demon spawn child scene, heh. That was quite funny, though do hope it all works out by some miracle. Always appreciate the detailed fun time scenes like at the end. gg
| DodgeThis chapter 21 . 10/26/2014
Snnmap! Serious biz bout to go down. Its great, and thankful miyu wasn't mentally scarred, (would've ruined it for me). Using solid snake as a fill in for raye's character makes it even more exciting.
| Gore chapter 21 . 10/26/2014
Hes going to kill the last one... very, very slowly.
I love that kind of thing (:
| DodgeThis chapter 5 . 10/25/2014
Very interesting story idea, love it so far.
I remember watching a movie on netflix with a similar scenario. Between german and british pilots i think, in 1940's stranded on an icy mountain.
Except this is much better since its not just a bunch of men huddling for warmth.