|Reviews for warriors: other worlds|
| Fireheart318 chapter 1 . 10/27/2015
| Jerenbee chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
Its been along time...
| Voyager15 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
KEEP WRITING OR ELSE STARCLAN WILL SEND IT'S WRATH UPON YOU! (jk) It's very good, but just a note, try to put in capitalizations (man, that is a long word!) so it's easier to read. Other than that, this is very good!
| LeviathanTamer chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
woah wait what huh what just happened at the end
| Species unknown chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
if this takes place durin halo CE then write the story if a cat that is part of a prophecy is in it. ps dont make jaypaw blind.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
if this takes place after halo 3 i got ideas
so when jayfeather finds out he was talking to a twoleg, he tries to escape but remembers the injuries, he tries calling out for help, but the human tells him to calm down, but jayfeather asks for his name, and the human tells him his name is ODST Edward Buck, jayfeather calls him ODST, but Buck tells him just to call him Buck. jayfeather tells him his name too.
later on jayfeathers injuries are healed medkits, biofoam, and luck. also master chief meets jayfeather.
hope this helps
PS can you let jayfeather have sight so he knows whats going on.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
dammit wuts taking u so long, its been like 2 years
| badgerfang chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
please keep writing im begging u this is already awsome and i love halo and warriors*sobs*
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
epic. just epic
| Hunter Alexander Crane chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
cool. keep writing
| Sunpath chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
I really liked bad you probably dropped the story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
keep adding on ! #$%\!&%**)(2-