Reviews for The Raven and the Mask
Guest chapter 6 . 7/12/2013
love it
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I think you need to go back to pre-school. Good idea, none the less.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/14/2012
That's good please continue
Kusami32 chapter 6 . 11/15/2012
JmsTonight chapter 6 . 11/25/2011
I completly fell in love with your story! For most Slaven pairings I dont usually like them but you just seem to make it perfect for this story! I hope you continue soon! Happy Writing!
The Weaver of Words chapter 5 . 8/12/2010

The Weaver of Words chapter 2 . 8/12/2010
Gingerstorm101 chapter 6 . 4/26/2010
its really good, can you you update soon plz

keep up the imaganation
The HongKonger chapter 6 . 12/27/2009
Improve the grammar and spelling please. Love the story, can't wait for the update.
witheringroots chapter 5 . 12/23/2009
I like your story but you should really work on spelling and grammar, i thought riley was a spell it really. If you don't want to find a beta.
I.C.2014 chapter 5 . 12/19/2009
Nice, putting a new villain like you did. Hope you

update soon.
Snufflebottoms chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
Please edit this and make the chapters longer.

Excellent idea though.
I.C.2014 chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
I like your story and I can't wait for an update. But you need to work on your spelling because some of words in here are misspelled or there is some grammer error. Keep up the good work though.
lamia-amo chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
I love Slaven fics and I am looking forword to how you play this out!

Update soon please1
crazyanimefreak15 chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Hm...intresting. But you really need to use spell check. Also proof read before posting. There's alot of grammar mistakes that make this hard to read. My suggtion is that you should get a beta reader if you don't want to do it yourself.
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